I am stunned by the beauty of these and not exaggerating. Mad props for:
~Sympathy for Joyce at her most difficult time. ~Ditto for Jenny. Her pulse beating 'my fault' and her fear of losing Giles were so well-thought. ~Faith's past, so horrible and so believable all at once. It wouldn't at all surprise me if she was a claustrophobic who managed to hide it. ~The title "Sorrowful Mysteries"! Extra exclamation points needed!!! ~Early Wesley, with his guilt and his obedience and he knows that Angel deserves to be saved but he just can't break out of the Council's hold...oh, how I love him.
So so much character in here. I am hopeful that this year will see you writing secondary characters more often because you sure have them pegged in drabble format.
Oh, and sorry you had to have a spammer as your first comment. If I could I would negate it with an extra piece of awesome, or something.
I am stunned by the beauty of these and not exaggerating. It's a good thing you added the second part, because I was pretty sure you were just being nice.
The title "Sorrowful Mysteries"! I often have trouble with titles, so I'm really proud of this one. (Learned the rosary thing in a book; glad someone caught it!)
...he knows that Angel deserves to be saved but he just can't break out of the Council's hold...oh, how I love him. I love Wesley in all incarnations. Suited Council Wes, Rogue Demon Hunter Wes, Boss of AI Wes...Also, random side note, I couldn't believe that he was American when I found out.
I am hopeful that this year will see you writing secondary characters more often because you sure have them pegged in drabble format. I'm afraid that's the only place I have them pegged. :( But I do feel really satisfied when I reach beyond B/A in my writing, even if it's only a drabble.
Oh, and sorry you had to have a spammer as your first comment. If I could I would negate it with an extra piece of awesome, or something.I didn't
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I actually tend to not see titles. When I remember to, I scan over the stories again to pick up what I missed.
Yeah, you should hear Alexis Denisof's real voice in Dollhouse. I kept wanting to tell him "Put on your glasses and talk right!" I hear he spent a long time in England, hence the excellent accent.
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~Sympathy for Joyce at her most difficult time.
~Ditto for Jenny. Her pulse beating 'my fault' and her fear of losing Giles were so well-thought.
~Faith's past, so horrible and so believable all at once. It wouldn't at all surprise me if she was a claustrophobic who managed to hide it.
~The title "Sorrowful Mysteries"! Extra exclamation points needed!!!
~Early Wesley, with his guilt and his obedience and he knows that Angel deserves to be saved but he just can't break out of the Council's hold...oh, how I love him.
So so much character in here. I am hopeful that this year will see you writing secondary characters more often because you sure have them pegged in drabble format.
Oh, and sorry you had to have a spammer as your first comment. If I could I would negate it with an extra piece of awesome, or something.
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It's a good thing you added the second part, because I was pretty sure you were just being nice.
The title "Sorrowful Mysteries"!
I often have trouble with titles, so I'm really proud of this one. (Learned the rosary thing in a book; glad someone caught it!)
...he knows that Angel deserves to be saved but he just can't break out of the Council's hold...oh, how I love him.
I love Wesley in all incarnations. Suited Council Wes, Rogue Demon Hunter Wes, Boss of AI Wes...Also, random side note, I couldn't believe that he was American when I found out.
I am hopeful that this year will see you writing secondary characters more often because you sure have them pegged in drabble format.
I'm afraid that's the only place I have them pegged. :( But I do feel really satisfied when I reach beyond B/A in my writing, even if it's only a drabble.
Oh, and sorry you had to have a spammer as your first comment. If I could I would negate it with an extra piece of awesome, or something.I didn't ( ... )
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I actually tend to not see titles. When I remember to, I scan over the stories again to pick up what I missed.
Yeah, you should hear Alexis Denisof's real voice in Dollhouse. I kept wanting to tell him "Put on your glasses and talk right!" I hear he spent a long time in England, hence the excellent accent.
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