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[onewaries]

pairing: jonghyun/jinki.
genre: au, porn with a nonsense plot, romance? stereotypes.
lenght: 8308 words.
rating: nc17.
warnings: dub-con, shit ending because the author is shit.
a/n: who said a bottom can't be a bully? /spazz.
this fic is unbetaed and english is not my native language, forgive me.
© newofolio

Comments

Jonghyella is the way.

[ext_1996192]

cioè io mi metto a fare sogni erotici su jonghyun maniaco pervertito, poi mi metto a piangere per il piccolo jinki, poi alzo il sopracciglio quando scopro un jinki ancora più pervertito di jonghyun e poi mi faccio pipì sotto immaginandomi jinki che si addormenta nei momenti meno opportuni asd
povero jjonghye c.c
comunque l'unica cosa che non va è che non c'è un continuo.
voglio matrimonio, luna di miele ''sex on the world'', voglio i figli con il capoccione e il dubulge e voglio loro due alle prese con pannolini, scuola, insegnanti, compiti, lavoro, cena, prime cotte, fidanzatini, festicciole e quant'altro asd.
good job, o meglio blow job, clemclem♥.

Re: Jonghyella is the way.

[onewaries]

meno male a qualcuno piace questa cosa. ieri ho apportato le ultime modifiche, ma mi è mancato poco al "cestinamento" convulsivo perché non mi piaceva e non mi piace. però poi ho pensato, ormai l'ho scritta, la posto. se fa schifo, fa schifo e basta. ed eccomi qui. ad ogni modo il tuo commento è spettacolare (citando "mi faccio pipì sotto"), certo avrei potuto continuarla ma le cose sdolcinate mi vengono male, era meglio smetterla finché si era in tempo, kek. grazie :' spero ti sia piaciuta davvero e tu non lo dica per non farmici rimanere male.

dubulge is dubulge.

[ext_1996192]

allora 'sto continuo?

Re: dubulge is dubulge.

[onewaries]

stai scherzando vero? il continuo non ci sarà. piuttosto, se ti crei un lj potremmo pensare di scrivere non il continuo, ma quella serie slice of life molto convincente. fammi sapere. qui non posso continuare per due motivi: 1- mi sono spompata troppo, 2- non saprei che altro continuare e scrivere. ash!

this ficccc

[anonymous]

this fic is awesome, srsly. i hope you write something else!

Re: this ficccc

[onewaries]

yup, sure. thank you (:

[viena_soma]

First I thought Jinki the one who bottoming and guess what I'm totally wrong ... Hahahahaha XD

Ah.... Story like this which I adore so much. Jerk with some nerd. And falling in love each other and have happy ending.. ♡(>̯┌┐<)♡ ♡(>̯┌┐<)♡

I love thisss..
Please write some jongyu fanfic again. Kekekekeekek
I like yours... So much....

Fighting

[onewaries]

yeah, this fic is supposed to be a tease, i know. sorry. everything makes you think jinki is a bottom nerd, but jonghyun is a pretty little bitch so.. keke.

thank you. really. i love happy ending too, i don't know why but i can't imagine jinki is hurt, even if it's in a fictitious story :| but.. i don't know how to thank you. i'm really glad you enjoyed this fic, i don't like it because my english sucks and i don't even know if it makes sense, but i trust you. so, thank you.

i'm writing another jongyu fic (yeah it's my favourite pairing) so.. just wait, i'll do my best cutie reader ♥

thank you. s-so much.

[viena_soma]

my English worse than you i thought.. English not my 1st language too.. i just can read English.. but writing.. ugh... totally disaster... wkwkwkwk

wow.. im really enjoying yours... really.. i love it.. same here... i cant imagine Jinki being hurt,im biased.. wkwkwkw... but it doesn't matter if the plot totally amazing i guess...

ah~~~ i will be waiting for your another fanfic.. yeah... >___<... cant wait.... XD..

and thank you too for making this fanfic... ^^

fighting *hug

[onewaries]

thank you for reading and commenting, cutie. /hugs tight

[oconje]

It seems English is not your first language, its Italien? I'm still quite impressed with your grasp of English and I really liked your storyline. The angst was wonderful and made my heart clench. Well done!

[onewaries]

yeh, i'm italian. you noticed, didn't you? :\ i know my english sucks, but in italy there're no jongyu fans or jongyu sites, so if i wanna write about jongyu, i have to do it in english. sorry for my mistakes and thank you. i really appreciate your comment, it makes me proud of my work. ouh, did you like the angst? really? it's the part that I feared the most, I thought it'd have been the worst in the story of all the fanfictions. because i'm.. not so good at describing emotions :| but if you say that, i believe you and.. thank you so much. ♥