[oneshot] light between my sins (maybe everything was meant to be)
Title: light between my sins (maybe everything was meant to be)
Pairing: broken kris/lay (lay pov)
Rating: pg-13
Genre: angst
Word Count: 869
Summary: image prompt. kris broke up with lay...and lay attempts to work through his painful emotions. A/N: written for aideshou's third challenge. if you enjoy the story, please vote for it on the 21st of this ( Read more... )
Pairing: broken kris/lay (lay pov)
Rating: pg-13
Genre: angst
Word Count: 869
Summary: image prompt. kris broke up with lay...and lay attempts to work through his painful emotions. A/N: written for aideshou's third challenge. if you enjoy the story, please vote for it on the 21st of this ( Read more... )
Comments 1
I think it described really well how one feel after a break-up, the different thoughts and emotions you would go through. I think maybe I would have liked it more if it had had like... how do I explain it.. pieces of action in between the emotions/thoughts? to hear how he deal with it not only in mind, but in body too. Such as, if he was avoiding Kris (which is says in the end that he'll do, but you know, actually experiencing him doing it.)
anyway, I still liked it a lot! What you did with your story, you did really well~~~ /envy
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