Drums.

Dec 14, 2007 09:20

Kindness compelled the man to hold the drum out, offering from the circle seated in the park. A blank face looked back at him, another strange homeless girl in tattered denim with eyes that spoke of the fractured mind so many had on the street ( Read more... )

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nystories December 14 2007, 04:03:09 UTC
Very evocative. Thank you for sharing it.

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nujalik December 21 2007, 06:29:16 UTC
Thank you! I think it'll be good for her.

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sinfulstories December 14 2007, 09:39:14 UTC
Very primal. Very raw. I like this writing style a whole lot.

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nujalik December 21 2007, 06:29:48 UTC
Thanks - I try to make each character different in cadence.

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