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belmanoir July 10 2008, 01:32:49 UTC
He'd never been able to figure out how Fraser managed to look invincible and defenseless at the same time.

Fraser is magic. Yes indeed. And awww! I love how Kowalski takes everything in stride.

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nos4a2no9 July 10 2008, 11:33:17 UTC
Kowalski rolls with the punches, it's true. And Fraser IS magic. These are crucial observations, Bel! I'm so glad you liked those descriptions.

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dessert_first July 12 2008, 21:16:13 UTC
But Kowalski whirled around, eyes blazing... He was suddenly terrified of Kowalski, and the kind of feeling a guy like that was capable of. Like he could do anything, or he'd kill himself trying. Just like the wolf, who'd chase a suspect until his heart exploded.

What a terrible will Kowalski had.

Whoa. This is fantastic, Kowalski so mercurial, so committed to--I wanted to say doing the right thing at the right time, but he does that by being the right thing at the right time. He's gentle with Vecchio when he needs it, rough with Fraser when Fraser needs that, and unyielding with both of them on this matter. And part of it is genuinely just him being kind / slutty / angry, but part of it is adapting who he is to fit the needs of the person he's trying to take care of. And that is so very Kowalski. I'm not saying his therapist would praise him for that sort of thing, but it's him all over.

"Shut it, Vecchio," Kowalski snapped. "We got one shot. Only one path through these woods, yeah? One chance to come out of this all in one piece ( ... )

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nos4a2no9 July 14 2008, 01:47:04 UTC
He's gentle with Vecchio when he needs it, rough with Fraser when Fraser needs that, and unyielding with both of them on this matter. And part of it is genuinely just him being kind / slutty / angry, but part of it is adapting who he is to fit the needs of the person he's trying to take care of. And that is so very Kowalski.

I'm so glad you picked up on this - that's exactly how I see Kowalski. Mutable, and adaptable, and usually done for the benefit of others. It's not exactly healthy, but it is how he demonstrates his devotion. And I'm so, so glad you saw it in this story, my dear.

Primal sex is my favourite! Right after soft-focus intense sex. Aaand silly, giggly, schmoopy sex. I...okay, fine. All sex is pretty great.

Thank you so much for your feedback! You're a real doll to do this, y'know? And so, so generous with your time and energy. I'm really touched and humbled, Dess. *hugs you tight*

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