A Cop's Legacy: 2.4 Birthdays

[noreins94]

Finally, a chance to write again. Here's the newest chapter of A Cop's Legacy. As always, comments and advice are always welcome. I don't know if it's just me, but this chapter seems kind of choppy. Please leave your opinion!

Comments

[iluvaus]

And now I'm completely caught up. Wow. I'm hooked. I love the characterization that's going on in this story.

And what's with this prophecy of a 'rift' coming in the family? I'm sensing familial tension in the works here. Very interesting and very good for plot. the pictures look great, but I do have one suggestion: maybe try sharpening the images a bit so they look more clear and less pixelated?

Just a thought. Anyway, excited to see these boys as teens, and wondering just who will be picked for heir. ^_^

[noreins94]

The rift will be explained in later chapters. The boys have a lot of growing up to do first. This generation will have an heir vote, so keep reading and pick a favorite!

[amylu1988]

Hi NoReins! According to my comments from before, this is the first new chapter for me. Sorry it's taken me so long to catch up, it's lovely to read about the family again.

[noreins94]

Thanks for taking the time to catch up! I greatly appreciated all of your comments.