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Sea / "What's the Difference?"

Mar 30, 2008 23:31

029. Sea
[Pairing] Shiwon / Sungmin
[Rating] PG
[Genre] Angst
[Word Count] 377
[Author's Note] Sorry it was so short D: and so angsty! But what can I do?

(My Archive!)

( He picked up a handful of sand, slowly letting it filter through his fingers... )

fandom: super junior, character: sungmin, character: shiwon, character: hankyung, category: 100 fic challenge, rating: pg, rating: pg-13

Comments 4

binkikitty March 31 2008, 07:01:04 UTC

Both were great.

A+ on the angsty shimin ;.;! Sad. But...it makes me hope for a part two sometime in the near future? LOL.

prz.

danceinthedark March 31 2008, 16:43:09 UTC

Now I'm not a fan of SungMin, so unfortunately, I really couldn't enjoy the first, although I know for a fact had it been ShiTeuk or ShiHan, I would be singing your praises for it :/ From a purely writing point of view, lovely~

But the second D: Omg, you break my heart woman. It's just so .... guh. The idea of a person like Han hurting himself, and losing someone, and.... guh TT_TT

...tear slipped out of his eye, mingling with the blood, and he thought that nothing had looked more appropriate.

Such a simple sentence, hardly descriptive, but the way the word "appropriate" is used rather than anything else is just so powerful D:

His love had killed himself, was dead; Hankyung was alive, but was dead, but-

“What’s the difference?”

I have read nearly every interpretation of this theme, or so it seems, since I've been keeping an eye out, and I have to say, this is by far the most angsty and beautiful I've seen T_T -mems this post and spams you with love- <333

lucid_acolyte March 31 2008, 17:44:01 UTC

the second one...is it just me or it's rella? (or I'm just reading too many hanchuls and idek) T__T I think there's a difference...but can hannie see that...
ack..so beautiful...thank you for writing this~!<333

tukutz May 23 2008, 06:55:00 UTC

You made me cry. In the best way, but still, I'm crying now. The first one was lovely, but the Hankyung one just killed me.