Comments | noelia_g: Fic: Phil Coulson, Office Hearthrob (Avengers, Clint/Phil, PG-13)

noelia_g

Fic: Phil Coulson, Office Hearthrob (Avengers, Clint/Phil, PG-13)

May 04, 2012 22:02

Title: Phil Coulson, Office Hearthrob ( Read more... )

clint/phil, the avengers, fanfic

Comments 12

tli May 5 2012, 13:35:13 UTC

This was fabulous! Clint's narration had me in giggles throughout.

daraq May 6 2012, 01:07:44 UTC

This was so much fun! Thank you!

nurse_stiney May 6 2012, 04:35:15 UTC

I AM SO ECSTATIC THAT CLINT BARTON CAN HAVE A PERSONALITY. AND YOUR VERSION OF HIM IS HYSTERICAL. LOLOLOLOLOL SO BEYOND ADORABLE I CAN'T EVEN TELL YOU HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS AND AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA ALL I CAN THINK OF NOW IS THOR'S FACEBOOK PAGE AND HOW MUCH I WANT IT. :D :D :D :D

dark_dreymer May 6 2012, 10:56:47 UTC

I loved this, you've got a great grasp on all the characters and Clint's voice in particular came through so clearly in the narration. The balance of the affectionate and sexual nature of Clint and Phil's relationship, mixed up with Clint's ever-so-human irrational emotions, was really well crafted and the scene on the couch, I'm not much of a visual person, but I could just see that moment so clearly in my head.

I enjoyed all the little details you included to build up the world: SHIELD running drills because the supervillains are on vacation, quirky techs in the Weapons Department (Who must not interact with Tony Stark), Clint framing Sitwell for the choc-chip theft because he should learn to talk himself out of a corner, Tony's coffee machine that dispenses Skittles, Clint blaming Natasha because she's not there to refute the blame (Expresses the depth of their friendship so brilliantly) and of course, Thor + Social Media is always a recipe for hilarity ( ... )

kubis May 6 2012, 15:22:05 UTC

ADORABLE. AND THOR. AND ADORABLE.

*wins for the most coherent comment*