Animals and Prizes 4

[nike_ravus]

Title: Animals and Prizes (4

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[mayireadtoday]

2) Being a belonging.

Makes me want to vomit. I know you didn't invent this -- that this is happening in parts of the real world. That's why it's so upsetting to me.

Also, I'm scared that in this fic you're going to have Jade's father give her away to some non-Tori alpha. I hope that doesn't happen.

I'm curious about what happened when Tori came home. Did Tori tell her parents what really happened? What was their reactions?

This paragraph is very hot and awesome: "I would boss her better [...] it was time to change the subject."

[nike_ravus]

No kidding. I've written one angry political rant ever, and it was basically about this sort of thing, and how it sneaks up on you.

I... will not reveal my plot. :)

That paragraph is totally the spark of much filthiness. I didn't go into detail. I could have. :)

[mayireadtoday]

That paragraph is totally the spark of much filthiness. I didn't go into detail. I could have. :)

I am very interested in reading filthy outtakes :)