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City on the River

May 22, 2012 23:37

Title: City on the River 20/?

Author: Alsike

Fandom: Criminal Minds/X-Men

Pairing: Emily Prentiss... eventually Emma Frost

Rating: PG-15

Summary: When one person travels into an alternate universe a thousand others are created. What if Didi showed up without a time slip on Emily's doorstep, in a world without mutants? What would a twenty-five year old ( Read more... )

city on the river, didi, criminal minds, x-men, au, emma/emily

Comments 15

siralesud May 23 2012, 05:19:23 UTC

God, how much I enjoy and always will enjoy your writing.

I've been craving tragic pairings, and yours is so wonderfully, beautifully broken. But they still manage to hold themselves together, hold onto each other, don't they?

I like what you wrote about family, too.

morthel May 23 2012, 06:08:32 UTC

Wonderful chapter. I really love this fic, and I look forward to every new part.

precious_sin May 23 2012, 07:58:51 UTC

Best way to wake up! I love this 'verse so much. Cutest none-couple couple ever.

kith_koby May 23 2012, 11:47:28 UTC

This was so powerful. And you say it's only angst, but it's not. These two... in this universe, they are both so broken. And they've been like that, on and off, for a huge part of the story. But here, I finally see hope. I see them beginning to move one, to live by themselves.

I also really like Elizabeth. She's aware of what she has to lose, and is working to keep it, and it's beautiful. But I'd love to see more of her interactions with Emma, because that sounds like such an interesting relationship...

In any case, simply beautiful, and more please.

nomakegirl May 23 2012, 11:55:32 UTC

This was beautiful. How is it you convey Emily's feelings so well? I can almost taste her emotions - desperation, despair, defiance...