Haha! Don't tell anyone, but I'm not a huge fan of Sam. And I needed Kara to be a bit freer than she was at that point so she can make some decisions later on and so things fit better into place. So... that's the story behind that, heh heh.
I can't remember what I predicted from STWOM, now that I think about it. I'll have to reread the backstory I came up with. And figure out where I'm going to put it in here.
what an amazing gut-punch this is so far. Especially the part about one of the Leobens being in the briefing room. That just got me, in a wonderful, terrible way.
When I wrote this chapter, I had an outline. Like, this chapter is old, I didn't write it recently, I wrote it about two months ago. So, that scene wasn't actually in my outline, I was just like, oh, well, that fits. So I stuck it in there.
Haha, thanksya! There will be some fantastic twists and turns in this if it works out right, and you'll love it!
Angst! I knew you writing a new fic could only lead to angsty goodness, and I was totally right. I'm liking this a lot so far. You're so good at writing Kara's internal monologues, it's pretty much exactly the way I picture her thinking, the way I think she perceives things.
The Two's in the briefing room was a chilling touch, I agree with smirk about that, and I also liked what you wrote about Lee being a reminder that things eventually blow up in your face. Because yeah, of course he is. Also? Tyrol + Kara? I can so picture that interaction happening on screen, I love when they talk to each other.
Anyway, yes, keep writing I'm intrigued and I want more in my greedy appleway! (and there was a hair mention in there, of course. Excellent)
Haha! The story itself isn't going to be that much angst, I don't think. I just needed to kill Sam off, and that means angst. I don't know. I'm good at getting into Kara's mind? That's kind of funny, since I'm almost 100% sure Kara doesn't even know what's going on in her mind.
The Lee thing... that intro about Kara being greedy was actually the reason why I started this fic at one point. Like I was just going to write a one-shot about Kara being greedy and stuff, but then I'm like... it just fits here. So that thing with Lee was a hold-over from that. Because Lee's going to be a secondary focus of this fic, and I doubt I'm going to come back to that. But anyway. Yes! The Tyrol and Kara thing, that was the best to write, I loved that, their harsh banter, that's always fun stuff.
Haha, I'll keep writing, I will! (Of course, did you expect anything less from me?)
You and your Sam hate, haha, but he does prove to be somewhat of a distraction I suppose. I don't love him all that much, so killing him is fine with me. and yeah Kara has no clue what she's thinking, she's all over the place. but the guilt? The guilt she knows.
Is it going to be shippy in any way, or more plotdriven? (I'm good with either, I'm flexible like that hehe)
I'm thinking more plotdriven on this one. MAYBE Kara/Lee, maybe. I mean, with what happens in the next chapter, it's going to be practically expected. But I'm not really going to focus on it. If I decide it's going to be shippy in that direction, it'll just be slight, maybe more subtextual than anything.
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I can't remember what I predicted from STWOM, now that I think about it. I'll have to reread the backstory I came up with. And figure out where I'm going to put it in here.
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what an amazing gut-punch this is so far. Especially the part about one of the Leobens being in the briefing room. That just got me, in a wonderful, terrible way.
Can't wait to see where you take this (as usual)!
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When I wrote this chapter, I had an outline. Like, this chapter is old, I didn't write it recently, I wrote it about two months ago. So, that scene wasn't actually in my outline, I was just like, oh, well, that fits. So I stuck it in there.
Haha, thanksya! There will be some fantastic twists and turns in this if it works out right, and you'll love it!
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The Two's in the briefing room was a chilling touch, I agree with smirk about that, and I also liked what you wrote about Lee being a reminder that things eventually blow up in your face. Because yeah, of course he is. Also? Tyrol + Kara? I can so picture that interaction happening on screen, I love when they talk to each other.
Anyway, yes, keep writing I'm intrigued and I want more in my greedy appleway! (and there was a hair mention in there, of course. Excellent)
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The Lee thing... that intro about Kara being greedy was actually the reason why I started this fic at one point. Like I was just going to write a one-shot about Kara being greedy and stuff, but then I'm like... it just fits here. So that thing with Lee was a hold-over from that. Because Lee's going to be a secondary focus of this fic, and I doubt I'm going to come back to that. But anyway. Yes! The Tyrol and Kara thing, that was the best to write, I loved that, their harsh banter, that's always fun stuff.
Haha, I'll keep writing, I will! (Of course, did you expect anything less from me?)
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Is it going to be shippy in any way, or more plotdriven? (I'm good with either, I'm flexible like that hehe)
GOOD (no, not really haha!)
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I'm thinking more plotdriven on this one. MAYBE Kara/Lee, maybe. I mean, with what happens in the next chapter, it's going to be practically expected. But I'm not really going to focus on it. If I decide it's going to be shippy in that direction, it'll just be slight, maybe more subtextual than anything.
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