Wow! the tension in this chapter is so perfect. You built it up really well! It feels delicious and dangerous at the same time. And I was not expecting kendra to just tell Kara outright like that. Good twist!
And of course I love the distinction drawn between Starbuck and Kara at the beginning. It rings very true for me.
I agree with smirk (that is smirk, right?!!) - I love the distinction you make between kara/starbuck, so true. and you have kendra's voice down, I actually read the lines out in australian in my head. Also, I love the last line, ah, it kind of gives me chills anytime anyone says that because it's such an awful (and awesome) line.
My favourite part though was probably Kendra getting high, I love how you described that.
(That is smirk, haha.) I try to read her lines out with her accent, that's how I know if it's in character or not, personally. And yes, that line is AMAZING. I love it to pieces!
I have no idea what it's like to get or be high, so I was just fooling around typing random stuff. Good to know I did a decent job with it.
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And of course I love the distinction drawn between Starbuck and Kara at the beginning. It rings very true for me.
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Right, it is true. I really like it when authors separate that.
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My favourite part though was probably Kendra getting high, I love how you described that.
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I have no idea what it's like to get or be high, so I was just fooling around typing random stuff. Good to know I did a decent job with it.
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