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[Oneshot] No walk in the park

Mar 02, 2010 18:21

TITLE: No walk in the park
AUTHOR: nicis_anatomy
CHARACTER: Jenny Shepard/Trent Kort
GENRE: Het, Romance
RATING: R
WORD COUNT: 1776
SUMMARY: When we had started dating last year, it had soon become clear that I would have to say goodbye to this planned-out life I had been living for years ... Written for prompt "strawberries and champagne" for older_not_dead. ( Read more... )

fandom: ncis, community: ncisdaily, community: older_not_dead, ncis: jenny_kort, fanart: fanfiction

Comments 12

nakeisha March 2 2010, 17:59:31 UTC

More than a little delectable.

They really are very good for one another.

And Trent is so romantic with his plans - even if they didn't quite pan out fully.

And it is very good.

nicis_anatomy March 2 2010, 18:49:15 UTC

;) He always turns out to be romantic when I write him. Maybe it's because I can picture him being more(canon) romantic than Jethro (for example). Or it's just the fangirl in me wanting more ... I don't know. And I don't really care what the reason may (or may not) be ;)

Thank you for reading this. I'm glad that it's not that bad for a first time. Maybe I will try to write more (soon).

nakeisha March 3 2010, 08:48:08 UTC

I can see what you mean and it works well and is believable.

It was more than not bad!

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nicis_anatomy March 2 2010, 18:53:26 UTC

Oh, you read this - although you knew it was Trenny? Wow ... thank you! I'm glad you starting to get interested in this pairing.
The ending ... well, I didn't know where to stop. It was my first time and I'm taking baby steps here. Maybe next time I will write more.
Thank you for reading this.

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nicis_anatomy March 2 2010, 19:04:02 UTC

;) I do the same and mostly decide by author or pairing ;)
You have written something yourself? Oh, I hope you will post it soon.

And the POV ... it just happened. I started and some time in the middle I realized that I was writing from Jen's POV. Normally, I don't do this. I use her perspective a lot, but still write in third-person (if that's the right term). I don't know why I changed this here, but in the end I was quite satisfied and decided not to change it back ;)
And I think the letter does count. Why not? *tries not to think about JD*

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marciafan March 2 2010, 19:32:06 UTC

I read it again (and noticed that you added a few things!! ♥) because this is just too good not to be read over and over ♥ And I rest my case about you and smut; you should write more of it!!

nicis_anatomy March 2 2010, 19:51:25 UTC

Thank you, Marzia. Without you I wouldn't have posted it. I think ... Yes, I added a few lines. I felt they were needed and the felt right ;)
And I won't say I will write more smut, but I might. Some day ;)
Thank you again for your help and your pep talk *hugs*

marciafan March 2 2010, 21:00:25 UTC

You're very welcome! You know you can always count on me to kick your rear end about the fics you write and are on the fence about ;)

nicis_anatomy March 3 2010, 06:26:58 UTC

That's good to know. Thank you ;) I might come back to you sooner or later. *hugs*

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nicis_anatomy March 3 2010, 06:25:59 UTC

Thank you!

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nicis_anatomy March 3 2010, 09:29:54 UTC

I will try. I promise ... as soon as I've stopped feeling insecure about this ;) I'm glad you liked it and your review definitely helped to convince me to write more, but it might take some time. I'm far from what you or others can write.
Thank you!!