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nicalyse

Just Off the Key of Reason 3/3

Nov 23, 2011 13:21

Title: Just Off the Key of Reason
Chapter: 3/3
Rating: NC-17. This story deals with an open relationship, so if that isn't for you, feel free to walk on by.
Characters: Santana/Finn/Rachel
Word Count: 29,000 (total)
Prompt: "If he doesn't want to pick between us, he shouldn't have to." Left by smc_27 at the Santana Lopez Drabble Meme. To say it got away ( Read more... )

character: rachel berry, fanfic: finn/rachel, fanfic: finn/santana, fanfic: santana/finn/rachel, character: finn hudson, character: santana lopez

Comments 7

smc_27 November 25 2011, 04:45:10 UTC

Okay, so can we talk for a second about how amazing Rachel Berry is? Because seriously, she's the best. Not just to Finn, but to Santana, and to herself, too. Instead of being all annoying and optimistic, she acknowledged that she and Finn might not last. I really loved that they both understood that it didn't mean that they didn't or wouldn't love each other.

And can I hug Santana? I love that she and Finn were legitimate friends before they even kissed. That girl needs one, badly.

And the actual threesome was pretty much stupid hot. I loved that this whole story was from Finn's perspective.

I hate to be that jerk who's all, "WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?" but um...What happens next?

nicalyse November 26 2011, 00:09:34 UTC

Rachel Berry wins everything, basically, and especially in this story. I do think it's in her character to just let things be what they are sometimes, which is really what this whole story was built on.

The more I think about Santana, the more I think she doesn't have any real friends. That girl is a first-rate self-saboteur.

I don't know what happens next, bb. Well...they graduate. And them I'm out. :P

wanderinghope December 2 2011, 08:35:58 UTC

I normally don't ship Finchel but this story just worked~ and should be canon. the end.

nicalyse December 8 2011, 01:49:25 UTC

Hey, thanks. Hearing that you think it worked is pretty much the best compliment I could have gotten. ;)

beta_goddess December 6 2011, 03:05:45 UTC

This... worked. Wow. Your characterization was spot on, and the hot was HOT. Really well done.

nicalyse December 8 2011, 01:51:53 UTC

Hearing that it worked is the best compliment you could have given me. Thank so much! (Well, hearing that it was hot is good, too.)

jessiewithani April 25 2012, 02:13:07 UTC

Okay, found myself here through the drabble meme and I must say this is awesome. Can't believe I hadn't noticed I've read some of your stuff on ff.net, as well (I totally get lost on LJ).