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k9feline October 9 2010, 13:44:02 UTC
Good chapter. I didn't find it jarring, repetitive, or terrible at all. As for angst...well, every life has some angst. :)

To me, it felt like a well structured chapter. It told a complete story in and of itself, while being part of a greater whole.

Looking forward to the next part.

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nevermore999 October 14 2010, 05:01:54 UTC
Thanks so much!

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the_narration October 11 2010, 18:11:08 UTC
This was really well done ( ... )

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nevermore999 October 14 2010, 05:02:50 UTC
Thank you a lot! That's what I was going for.

Hahah, I'm glad I wasn't the only one who thought of that. I don't want it to be a hallucination cuz it's too good.

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