Safe Refuge for the Exile, Part 2: Left Hanging

[never_moor]

Nevermoor: Safe Refuge For the Exile

2: Left Hanging

Comments

[eviinsanemonkey]

This is fantastic. I love your style and the characters are all interesting.

[never_moor]

Thanks very much <3

[vilakins]

What would I do? I'd shake his hand. Wow, Baynham, way to make friends in your new manor.

I'm enjoying this and wondering what on earth is going on and what Nevermoor is.

Any chance of putting each chapter behind a cut? It would make it easier for new readers to scroll to the one they want. :-)

[never_moor]

He's a bit of a berk, isn't he? :) Thanks for reading! Good point about the cut, I'll do it now!

[jaxomsride]

Oh dear, definitely NOT how to "Make friends and influence people".

Poor Baynham things go from bad to worse.
Admittedly the description of the stranger had me thinking of Holmes a bit.

[scribewraith]

loving this so far - really engaging ;)

[lelek]

Way to go there, Baynham, making friends already.

I'm really enjoying this! The characters are already engaging. :D One thing, you've got a typo: the second time you wrote "yuppie" you added an extra "i".