Lucky (Ice-cream pt.2)

[neolithicdream]

TITLE: Lucky
AUTHOR: Neolithicdream
PAIRING: Callie & Arizona
RATING: PG 13
SUMMARY: Just 3 moments in time post Crash and Amputation. First is within a year of Plane Crash, the second approximately 18 months after Crash, the third approximately 3 years of it. Sometimes you just are lucky. (Conceived and written before eps. 9.08 and 9.09.)

Comments

[neolithicdream]

Yes I thought you were going to have me committed to a Twilight home o the Bewildered for a while or a Drig Rehab!!!

Your suggestions made it better so thanks. glad you liked it ( and for talking me of the ledge when LJ started acting up,)

[puffy_wuffy]

HOORAY! GLORIOUS FLUFFY MAYHEM!

[neolithicdream]

Thank You! Glad you liked it!

[neolithicdream]

Well pralines and cream is my favorite but then I never say no to Strawberry cheesecake either. I was tempted to stick some Rocky Road in the story but reckon we get enough of that on the show.

Glad you liked, thanks.

[funkyshaz57]

A rarity for you if I do say so myself, fluffy beautifulness isn't your normal genre but this was absolutely lovely! I so very much enjoyed this second part.

"How little must her wife think of her"

"How little her wife must think of herself"

Great two lines that paralled each other and what both Callie and Arizona probably are thinking. Really nice way or working that in and having it make so much sense and for it to open Callie's eyes to get her to understand why Arizona asked that question - Nicely done.

And Callie's Euphemisms while talking cracked me up!!!

Arizona feeling so...small and insecure and undesirable is the worst thing ever to read but you really evened it out with the lovely speech at the end and Arizona finally taking that leap opening herself to Callie like that at the end - Perfect!

Realy enjoyed this A LOT!

[neolithicdream]

I hope this part explained the line you didn't like in the first part! Should she understand, have to forgive if Callie had strayed - well no, not necessarily at all, but she was feeling that insecure, that undesirable,that scared. Thankfully after her initial annoyance Callie saw that and came to the rescue.

Glad you liked it!

[elledee68]

Lovely stuff. Just like ice-cream!

[neolithicdream]

Made me very hungry writing this!

Thank you!