Comments | nefhiriel: White Collar Fic: Confidence Man 2/2

nefhiriel

White Collar Fic: Confidence Man 2/2

May 14, 2011 13:08

Continued from part one, here.

( Fic, Part Two )

fandom: white collar, writerly, genre: promptfill

Comments 33

micheleeeex May 16 2011, 19:47:28 UTC

I love this!!

nefhiriel May 17 2011, 03:51:17 UTC

Thank you! :D

damietta May 17 2011, 00:50:47 UTC

People think Peter is the fierce one; I wouldn't want to tangle with Elizabeth!

nefhiriel May 17 2011, 03:51:48 UTC

LOL. Very, very true. ^^

wyncatastrophe May 17 2011, 04:40:41 UTC

This. Is. Awesome.

I love it in every possible way. Can I please snuggle your fic?

nefhiriel May 18 2011, 15:11:10 UTC

Aww, thanks! :3

Snuggle it at will, LOL.

anonymous May 17 2011, 20:27:11 UTC

Hi, I'm Liz. Wow, really enjoyed this. Love the sense of growing trust between Peter and Neil, but that telling the truth still isn't Neil's first instinct.

Thanks xx

nefhiriel May 18 2011, 15:12:08 UTC

Thanks so much, Liz! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. :D

cairistiona7 May 17 2011, 21:04:47 UTC

Awww... sweet! I like Peter watching out for Neal. Some fics take that a little overboard, but you have just the right feel for them both, so they (well, Neal, mostly) come across as adults. There really is something about Neal that brings out the mothering instincts!

And my favorite line(s): "Yeah. Death by wisecrack. That was going out in a real Caffrey-style blaze of glory."

I love that!

nefhiriel May 18 2011, 15:15:35 UTC

Yay for Neal acting like an adult! ^^ I must confess, I understand the temptation to "whimpify" him, and have Peter always rushing in for the save. But I do like to try and keep things in balance, and have Neal use his brain to get out of problems. Because he is terribly clever that way. *bg*

Thanks, mellon-nin! *hugs*