[Fic] My Daughter is My Rival (Chapter 1)

[neer_nix]

Title: My Daughter is My Rival

Author: neer_nix

Pairing: Yama, Sakuraiba (one-sided)

Rating: PG 13

Length: 3100

Genre: Romance, slight angst, fluff

Disclaimer: none of them is mine, only the plot is.

Warning: un-betaed

Summary: a single father Sakurai Sho never imagined that someday his love rival is his own daughter.

A/N: I’m back with the update! Thank you so

Comments

[un4ch4n]

Huwaaa that's cute >.<

Aiba chan give Sho chan heart attack for a second when he confess to him XDD

Aaaaaaa I already curious with the next chapter
>.

[neer_nix]

Sakuraiba scenes would never leave this fic, I think~ lol
There aren't much Yama yet, since I take it slow... too slow maybe~ XD

Thank you for reading and commenting! XDD

[g_na94]

It's lovely...
Sho is such a good father toward Yuri
Can't wait to read the next chapter!!
Hope that there is more yamapair scene...hahax... XDD
Thanks for sharing!!!
^____^

[neer_nix]

Well, after watching they being childminder, I always had impression that Sho will be a good father~ XD
Don't worry, Yama pair will come up later.. I'm just taking it rather slow~ :D

Thank you for reading and commenting! (^o^)/

[sweetdreaming13]

I actually don't read yama fics, but the plot really caught my attention… and I'm loving the fic.
Also, I've never beta-ed any fic, but if you're looking for a beta, I offer myself (since I'm on vacation and I really love grammar. C: ) to be your beta, if you want, of course. Anyway, I'm curious about how the story will develop, especially with the father-dauther relationship and how their love interest will affect it.
C:

[neer_nix]

Ah! Glad to hear that! I was kinda nervous since it's my first Arashi's fic, and multi-chap one on top of that.
And thank you so much for your offer!! I'm indeed looking for one, but since there are someone who also offered to be my beta, I'm kinda confused to make a decision.
But for now, can we exchange contacts first?

Really, thank you so much! *hugs*

[sweetdreaming13]

Ok, I'll send you a message with my contact info and we'll see! C:

[risuw_chan]

was aiba telling the truth? or he's just joking?
i'm kind of like the idea of aiba falling in love with kid (eventho it makes him a lolicon) XDDD
can't wait for next^^

[neer_nix]

Well, he's just joking. After all he was in love with Sho although he couldn't say it~ XD
Ah, yes... but maybe not that kind of love, since that kid is just about 7 years old. >.<

I'll try to update soon!
Thank you for reading and commenting! (^.^)/

[boblemon]

Aw, cute update! Except I feel bad for Ohno because of the misunderstanding. And I really think Aiba is in love with Sho but can't say anything to him... Which is sad because you already listed the pairing as yama, lol.

Uhm... I usually don't volunteer to beta any more because I've been known to be flaky in the past, but I'm pretty interested in this story, so if you just want someone to help you with grammar I probably have enough time.

[neer_nix]

I also don't know why this fic turned into Yama even though my otp is actually Sakuraiba.. (-,-;)
But I still found Yama is cute pairing~ XD

Ah! Thank you so much for your offer!! But since there's also someone else who offered to be my beta, I got confused to make a decision.. So, for now, can we exchange contacts first? :D

Thank you so much, really! XD

[boblemon]

Yama is very cute! So don't worry, it's good to branch out with the love! :D

>_< I should have checked the other comments first! I'm sorry for the trouble. It's probably better if you use me as a backup or something, but I'll pm you my email address anyway.