The silent world of Charlie Matheson, Charlie + Monroe Militia, AU, PG, (465 words) || Prompt: Words.
After Ben's death, Rachel makes a confession to Monroe and Charlie deals with the consequences.
Author's notes: I started with Charlie and Monroe and just never got anywhere else. Oh and Jeremy crept in somehow. I don't really know how to write
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And I'm really tired, because even though it clearly says Charlie, I read the whole fic thinking it's Rachel and only afterwards realizing it's Charlie. Boy does that change my perspective on the whole thing, LOL. Even if she doesn't talk, I like Charlie's musings, I like her "voice" here.
You should feel honored that yours is the first Revolution fic I've read this half of the season. Now if I could only get my muse to cooperate...
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At least you're happy :D
even though it clearly says Charlie, I read the whole fic thinking it's Rachel and only afterwards realizing it's Charlie. Boy does that change my perspective on the whole thing, LOL.
I love that.
I should have made it - choose your own characters.
Sometimes I read some of the stuff I wrote months ago, where it mentions 'Charlie's father' and so I happily I read it as Ben...until I realise that at the time I was writing, I meant Bass O_O....it's disconcerting.
I'm really glad you read it that way. Good job, Ivy's tired brain.
I do feel honoured. And hey, if you want I'll throw things at your muse until it agrees to surrender to your will.
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I should have made it - choose your own characters.
LOL, maybe you should have. The whole thing just seemed so "yeah, ok, obviously this is how Rachel and Bass were, no biggie" and then I realized it was Charlie and went "Oh, kinda biggie".
I do feel honoured. And hey, if you want I'll throw things at your muse until it agrees to surrender to your will.
Well, I started my Rason fic, it's like 400+ words right now. Starting is the big step, right? Now I need to be less tired and figure where the hell the fic is going, cause right now it's just lots of back and forth dialogue (I realized I didn't even explain anything prior to the fic starting, which I really should). Rambling, ignore me. My muse is being tied up in the basement until it cooperates, you're welcome to throw things at it.
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I think everyone's fics are better in their heads, mine definitely are.
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Thanks for commenting. The only thing worse than posting something after a bit of a hiatus, is wondering if anyone's read it.
Your fics are awesome.
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"in a room closer to the sky than she’s ever been" - a very pretty image.
Greedy chocolates. The wordlessness of trying to express who we are (especially in a cage)... LOVE.
And I'm still fresh off watching that glowing Tracy video, so I was picturing Charlie's radiance the whole time. Keep thy pen in hand and writeth some more. The world is better for it.
(And just for the record, once I take pen in hand my fics have a completely autonomous life. They don't really exist separately in my head than in my pen. It's almost a little scary, since sometimes I'll be all: Noooo, Butters, no: why are you doing this to us? And then the Gollum side will be all: yesssss, my precious. Randall and Miles are having sex now! Nooooo! Yesss! So perhaps you're better off for the shinier head fics!)
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Keep thy pen in hand and writeth some more. The world is better for it.
Awwwwh. *beams* Thank you.
(That is scary. And EW Randall and Miles. Thanks for that image.)
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brand new reader. What may you suggest in regards to your put up that
you made some days in the past? Any certain?
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