Fic: The silent world of Charlie Matheson

Aug 04, 2013 00:41

The silent world of Charlie Matheson, Charlie + Monroe Militia, AU, PG, (465 words) || Prompt: Words.
After Ben's death, Rachel makes a confession to Monroe and Charlie deals with the consequences.

Author's notes: I started with Charlie and Monroe and just never got anywhere else. Oh and Jeremy crept in somehow. I don't really know how to write ( Read more... )

(c): captain jeremy baker, (c): charlie matheson, (r): pg, (l): ficlet, (misc): prompt table fill, (fw): fanfic, (c): major tom neville, (g): au, (c): sebastian "bass" monroe

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ivy_b August 4 2013, 17:54:01 UTC
Thursday- you're writing again, yay! God I know what you mean about it being better in your head, that's how most of my fics are.

And I'm really tired, because even though it clearly says Charlie, I read the whole fic thinking it's Rachel and only afterwards realizing it's Charlie. Boy does that change my perspective on the whole thing, LOL. Even if she doesn't talk, I like Charlie's musings, I like her "voice" here.

You should feel honored that yours is the first Revolution fic I've read this half of the season. Now if I could only get my muse to cooperate...

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mustbethursday3 August 8 2013, 11:01:00 UTC
Reluctantly...terribly...writing again.

At least you're happy :D

even though it clearly says Charlie, I read the whole fic thinking it's Rachel and only afterwards realizing it's Charlie. Boy does that change my perspective on the whole thing, LOL.

I love that.

I should have made it - choose your own characters.

Sometimes I read some of the stuff I wrote months ago, where it mentions 'Charlie's father' and so I happily I read it as Ben...until I realise that at the time I was writing, I meant Bass O_O....it's disconcerting.

I'm really glad you read it that way. Good job, Ivy's tired brain.

I do feel honoured. And hey, if you want I'll throw things at your muse until it agrees to surrender to your will.

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ivy_b August 8 2013, 12:52:54 UTC
I love that.

I should have made it - choose your own characters.

LOL, maybe you should have. The whole thing just seemed so "yeah, ok, obviously this is how Rachel and Bass were, no biggie" and then I realized it was Charlie and went "Oh, kinda biggie".

I do feel honoured. And hey, if you want I'll throw things at your muse until it agrees to surrender to your will.

Well, I started my Rason fic, it's like 400+ words right now. Starting is the big step, right? Now I need to be less tired and figure where the hell the fic is going, cause right now it's just lots of back and forth dialogue (I realized I didn't even explain anything prior to the fic starting, which I really should). Rambling, ignore me. My muse is being tied up in the basement until it cooperates, you're welcome to throw things at it.

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hithelleth August 4 2013, 19:05:15 UTC
I can imagine it would go down something like this were Bass Charlie's father. And I love you've made Jeremy her new BFF/protector/teacher/whatever.

I think everyone's fics are better in their heads, mine definitely are.

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mustbethursday3 August 8 2013, 11:03:03 UTC
Jeremy always weasels his way in (whenever I make Charlie Bass' kid) - always wanting attention and to be loved XD

Thanks for commenting. The only thing worse than posting something after a bit of a hiatus, is wondering if anyone's read it.

Your fics are awesome.

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buttercups3 August 4 2013, 23:44:21 UTC
Awww. Feels.

"in a room closer to the sky than she’s ever been" - a very pretty image.

Greedy chocolates. The wordlessness of trying to express who we are (especially in a cage)... LOVE.

And I'm still fresh off watching that glowing Tracy video, so I was picturing Charlie's radiance the whole time. Keep thy pen in hand and writeth some more. The world is better for it.

(And just for the record, once I take pen in hand my fics have a completely autonomous life. They don't really exist separately in my head than in my pen. It's almost a little scary, since sometimes I'll be all: Noooo, Butters, no: why are you doing this to us? And then the Gollum side will be all: yesssss, my precious. Randall and Miles are having sex now! Nooooo! Yesss! So perhaps you're better off for the shinier head fics!)

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mustbethursday3 August 8 2013, 11:05:49 UTC
Hee, I'm glad you bothered to read it like it :D

Keep thy pen in hand and writeth some more. The world is better for it.

Awwwwh. *beams* Thank you.

(That is scary. And EW Randall and Miles. Thanks for that image.)

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kathrynthegr8 August 30 2013, 16:10:04 UTC
Love this!

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