ka_verse Prompt 2, 'Let Go'

Sep 08, 2010 18:38


Prompt 2, 'Let Go'

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"It's the game of life. Do I win or do I lose? One day they're gonna shut the game down. I gotta have as much fun and go around the board as many times as I can before it's my turn to leave."
Tupac Shakur

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character: ax, fandom: animorphs, character: tobias, ka_verse, character: marco, character: rachel, fanfiction

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lisacharly September 9 2010, 01:12:45 UTC
I absolutely love this (though I don't entirely buy Rachel beating Marco at Risk - you just know she'd try to conquer Asia, and you just can't hold on to that kind of land!). Marco's dialogue is spot-on, too, and I can absolutely picture them doing all these things to unwind. Especially to unwind.

The last line is sobering and well-phrased.

Also, thanks so much for the plug! That series seems to be getting a lot of mileage for being essentially a collection of random crap. ;)

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natural_blue_26 September 9 2010, 01:40:13 UTC
Hmmm- I was trying to set up a situation where Rachel's impulsivenss surprisingly trumps Marco's hesitating too long to overthink the different angles of things... Let's pretend they double teamed and Tobias convinces Rachel to not do the Asia takeover ;)

I'm really glad you liked it! That last line got rewritten mulitiple timew. :P

Your Marco dialog is all intimidating, so I was afraid to get the tone wrong, etc. How could I not plug Punchlines? I went back and reread all of it today to help tweak my Marco lol.

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lisacharly September 9 2010, 02:09:44 UTC
Timed Risk, maybe? I can see double-teaming working too. Though I suppose Risk does have a huge element of luck.

Aww, I'm glad I could be a resource for irreverent snarkery. ;)

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natural_blue_26 September 9 2010, 20:27:22 UTC
The timed element of luck is very handy when playing Risk against someone who could normally wipe the floor with you... ;) ;)

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buffyangellvr23 September 12 2010, 03:31:20 UTC
great work :)

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natural_blue_26 September 12 2010, 07:14:24 UTC
Thank you!!!

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with_rainfall August 30 2012, 10:38:02 UTC
Gah, you write Ani!chillout time so well! I especially like the way Tobias & Marco don't see eye to eye; I've never understood the fanon where they become BFFs overnight (or at all, really).

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