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nasonexyouswine

Fic: Gravity Thou Art A Heartless Bitch (4)

Jul 17, 2011 02:04

Media: Fic
Title:Gravity Thou Art A Heartless Bitch (4/4)
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers (If any): None
Warnings (If any): Angst (like a lot)
Word Count: ~4000
Summary: Darren and Chris are friends. Like really good friends. And good friends can have sex every now and again without it meaning anything right? Right?
A/N: Firstly title stolen from ( Read more... )

rated: nc-17, fandom: glee, fanfic, pairing: crisscolfer

Comments 63

mulder1921 July 17 2011, 01:15:07 UTC

OMG!!!! So excited to see the last part of this posted. I had a feeling it would be today! Off to read!

kaleidoruby July 17 2011, 01:25:03 UTC

There will be no lynching, at least from me anyway. I haven't left a comment yet because I was waiting for the final part, but from start to finish, I really loved this story. I don't usually venture into RPF, but something about the description (plus the BBT title!) made me want to read it, and I'm so glad I did.

Your portrayal of Darren's confusion was just perfect - I could feel his pain and his fear at coming out after telling everyone or so long that he was straight. I'm a little sad that he didn't just give into himself, BUT the ending completely makes sense with the rest of it.

I kind of can't say anything else coherent and I just want to keyboard smash my love for you and this fic right now. It's going into my memories for sure!

in short: I love this fic ♥

nasonexyouswine July 17 2011, 15:17:09 UTC

Oh wow I'm so happy that I was able to lure you into RPF *evil grin* and I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

I feel like Darren would find it very hard to suddenly go against everything he's always said and that the fear of what would happen would be enough to stop him from being able to be comfortable witha relatonship.

Lol I always love seeing keyboard smashes (as long as they are the good kind :P)

Thank you very much! ♥

mulder1921 July 17 2011, 01:37:46 UTC

I just sped through this and you had me near tears a couple of times. I could feel the heartbreak they both felt. But you killed me with that ending. I am a "needs closure" kind of person, and hopeful or not, its still difficult.

I have my fingers crossed that maybe you'll do an epilogue or one-shot to finish this story completely. I will refrain from lynching (for now).

nasonexyouswine July 17 2011, 15:18:32 UTC

Lol then there is lynching in my future? Don't worry I always intended to write a sequel or follow up to this, I just didn't realise how many people would want one!

So hopefully you'll get your closure :D

Thank you for reading and reviewing! ♥

nobodymove July 17 2011, 23:04:53 UTC

Sequel! YES! SEQUEL! I'll beg if I have to.

aalikane July 17 2011, 01:39:40 UTC

...Lynching you say?

Why would there be lynching? Just because you teased us for 4 chapters, and then left us with nothing resolved? Chris still loves Darren...Darren still loves Chris....but neither one of them are closer to actually doing something about it?

I sincerely hope there is a sequel so that I'm not just, y'know...grumbling over here about the lack of a happy crisscolfer ending.

nasonexyouswine July 17 2011, 15:34:10 UTC

Wow OK. Um yeah. Not quite sure what to say lol.

I always had plans to write a sequal for this so that's currently in the works. I never intended to write a happy ending for these two though so we'll have to see where my muse takes me.

Thanks for sticking with me though and giving me an honest review :D

aalikane July 17 2011, 17:03:52 UTC

Okay so after rereading my reply, it came out waaaay harsher than I originally intended, for that I apologize. (I blame my insane mother who had me cleaning the entire house top to bottom yesterday, and my extreme desire to *not* do it)

The reason I hate that there wasn't a happy ending, is because....that's where it looked like it was heading towards. Whenever I see the sort of story where Chris/Darren (or Kurt/Blaine for that matter in an AU verse) dance around their feelings for a while, indulge in the physical without really thinking about the impacts until its too late, we usually see a happy ending once they get their heads out of their asses. But we didn't in this one. To me, it just seemed like there should be another chapter or two to finish this off. It just doesn't seem finished. :/ Even with a sequel in mind, *this* story, this conflict, this precise flow of character and plot development still seems unresolved.

That's why I didn't like the ending....if I make any sense at all. :/

kay_hearts July 17 2011, 01:56:53 UTC

ºAº *strangled noise*

I could never lynch you, I love your writting and THIS fic so much! I loved the journey. All the conflict is so well described it pulls and squishes my heart. I really thank you for the hope at the end. I don't think I would have been able to not cry if they had ended never speaking again :( But I'm a hopeless wishful thinking reader so I'm here at the last sentence dreaming/hoping Darren won that award and when he was up on that stage, after thanking cast & crew he declared his love to Chris to woldwide television broadcast.my turn for "don't kill me" ;_;

nasonexyouswine July 17 2011, 15:36:09 UTC

I was going to finish it at the coffee shop scene but I thought people would hate that ending lol so I was like OK I'll just try and put some hints of reconciliation in here.

Thank you so much for um not lynching me lol, I'm really glad you like it. And there's a follow up in the works now because so many people have demanded closure :P

♥