Comments | namistai8: Skip Beat: Kyouko/Shou [Asunder, part 3]

namistai8

Skip Beat: Kyouko/Shou [Asunder, part 3]

Aug 21, 2009 18:20

In honor of chapter 145!

Title: Asunder, part 3
Author: namistai8
Character/Pairing/Group: Kyouko/Shou, with mentions of Kyouko/Ren and Kyouko/Reino
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer/Notes/Whatever: Based on chapter 140 - 145. Yes, even for 145. If you don't want to be spoiled, then don't read.

Asunder, part 1 | Asunder, part 2

( Asunder, part 3 )

fanfiction, skipbeat, shou

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namistai8 August 22 2009, 01:32:27 UTC

Honestly, I had thought of this fic as a three parter. There may be a fourth one, depending on what happens in the upcoming chaters.

selenity136 August 22 2009, 02:01:34 UTC

This was simply amazing. I love how you written a logical-lovable sense from Sho's point of view. I hope you'll continue this, but I fear that if the next chapter of Skip Beat does not bode well for Sho (like Kyouko trying to kill him for that stunt), I hope you'll go for a different route--or you know what, they got together in the end.

But really, great job on the chapter.

namistai8 August 22 2009, 11:30:22 UTC

Originally this was a three parter, depending on what happens I can either make it a fourth parter.

I've also thought of doing one off-shoot called "Running Up that Hill" if it doesn't go well. We'll see.

yokainomiko August 22 2009, 02:42:50 UTC

Yay! I just reread the other chapters of "Asunder" like, two days ago hoping that you would update with the recent Shou/Kyouko moments. I feel so sad that this pairing isn't more popular D: You did a great job!

namistai8 August 22 2009, 11:31:05 UTC

Haha. Maybe you're psychic?

I don't understand why this pairing isn't more popular. Sure, Shou an ass... but Ren isn't Mr. Nice Guy either.

mousey_sama August 22 2009, 03:01:40 UTC

Great, absolutely brilliant! I especially like your take on chapter 145, with the actions and feelings leading up to the kiss *and* the description of it. :3 And I'm in total agreement regarding Shou's guts! XD

namistai8 August 22 2009, 11:31:21 UTC

SENK YOU.

75marshy November 7 2009, 03:07:20 UTC

I love how you elaborated on Shou's feelings.

And this was my favourite paragraph.

He makes every selection carefully. He knows its atonement - for every time he forgot to bring her flowers, for all those years when he should have and didn't. Moth Orchids for every time when he should have held her hand. Sparkling Beads for every time he should have been there. Freshwater Pearls for everytime he should have said something. Anything.

He doesn't care if he has to buy out all the flower shops in Tokyo.

... and that kiss, I rest with that, even though I know that Ren/Kyouko will end up together. I do not like Ren... he is too Gary-sue. D: Perfectly flawed characters rub me in the wrong way.