Fic: Such A Long Time (24, 1/1)

[namarie24]

Title: Such A Long Time
Spoilers: Up to the finale of 24: LAD, and speculation of what might be coming out of the LAD Blu-Ray featurette.
Characters: Chloe O'Brian, Tony Almeida, Kim Bauer, Kate Morgan, Belcheck
Rating: PG-13 for language and a mention of self-harm
Summary: After she returns to the US, Chloe visits someone she once counted as

Comments

[marinw]

This is great! I love the idea of Kate/Belcheck/Chole and even Kim and Tony (!) going to rescue Jack. Your Chloe is perfect!

And of course Belcheck has bags of money. He is such a man of mystery.

Hope you get inspired to write a sequel.

[namarie24]

Thanks so much! I liked the idea a lot, as well. I would love to see it happen on-screen. *wistful sigh*

Your Chloe is perfect!
Aww, thank you! That makes me happy to hear. I love her so.

I would love for inspiration to strike for a sequel, as well, although the logistics of the actual prison break & rescue elude me at the moment. Heh.

[union_jack24]

You have captured Chloe so well! I can just imagine that Chloe would try and get Jack back by any means as he means so much to her and sacrificed himself for her.

I hope you write more like this!

[namarie24]

Thank you so much! That's high praise. I love Chloe, and yes, I just have to believe she would not stop until she finds a way to get Jack back.

A sequel/another story like this is a definite possibility! I enjoyed writing this one quite a bit.