Black Swan (2/?)

[musadinessuno]

Title: Black Swan
Author: musadinessuno
Beta: my pumpkin, the lovely thekeyholder
Pairing: BellDom
Rating: overall R, PG-15 this part
WARNINGS: teenage angst and pointe shoes (yesss) - also, bit of language for this chapter. :))
Summary: everyone's got secrets.
Disclaimer: I do not own Muse, I swear (although, I'll admit it, I had the best conversations of my life with the

Comments

[musadinessuno]

Cheers, sweetie! Thanks for reading this and happy New Year! :D ♥♥♥

[mjartrod]

How come you've gotten so few comments so far? This story deserves more love, it's absolutely effin' stunning. There are so many things that could've gone wrong, given the premise, but it's pefection, all of it

[musadinessuno]

Aw. This warmed my heart like only a cup of steaming hot chocolate topped with marshmallows would - seriously, thank you so much, it means a lot to me that you actually took time to read this story and let me know what you thought about it. Add this to the fact that no one has ever complimented my writing like you just did and you'll get a blushing Elisa clapping her hands like an idiot. *hugs* ♥♥♥

My English really isn't anything great - of course I feel more comfortable when I write or speak in my own language, but I do try my best. I'm constantly looking up for synonyms and word meanings, or even whole periods on google, because sometimes a sentence would make perfect sense in my head, but then I end up noticing that I wrote it as if I were to write in Italian and, trust me, that does not work at all. XD

Ask Brigi what the beta session was like, she kept coming up with "um, I think this might be an italianism, it doesn't make any sense in current English" and "THIS SENTENCE IS TOO LONG!". I shall thank her endlessy for the help

[mjartrod]

Haha, nothing tops hot chocolate at a time like this lol Maybe with marshmallows? Must try... But thanks for comparing me to hot chocolate, feeling instantly warm lmao <3

I know exactly what you mean with looking up synonyms and stuff, I do that myself too :p That's why it takes me so long to write anything myself haha Also, that's why I'm saying you've got great English, cos English isn't my native tongue either (I'm Portuguese) so I know how it is to try to express yourself (writing!) in another language.

Actually listened to The Swan Lake this afternoon, inspired by this :D Happy to hear we'll get more Swan soon wheee

*smooches back*

[musadinessuno]

Well, if it's white hot chocolate then I'll have mine with a sprinkle of cinnamon and no marshmallows... maybe a couple of ginger biscuits to go with it, too. *offers cuppa*

Yes, exactly - that takes a hella long time! Also, being the scrupulous grammar nazi I am when it comes to Italian, I'm never completely satisfied with what I write in English. This is both a good and a bad thing. A curse, actually. XD

I would have never guessed you were Portoguese YOUR English is G R E A T ! One more reason to compare you to hot chocolate! ♥

I study Japanese and Korean at Uni and I already picked English for my extra-exams, but I remember wanting to take Portoguese because it sounds SO LOVELY! Really, it's one of the sweetest languages I've ever heard. /envyenvyenvy

Awe, I love Swan Lake - well, I love everything from Tchaikovsky - so glad you felt inspired too and listened to it! ♥♥

*hugs*

[ext_2121753]

Wow! So beautiful! I loved the ballet lesson. It felt so real.
But what's with the biscuit? Can't wait to read more.

[musadinessuno]

Cheers, darling! :D
Thank you so much for taking time to read this - you might be able to find out more about that biscuit soon enough! ;))

Happy New Year! ♥♥♥

[nuraicha]

I loved this chapter, especially the Dom part, because I am not much into ballet and it actually creeped me out a bit Meg's attitude :/

As I said, this was s good! Love all the details and how easily the conversation flows everywhere! I'm so intrigued with Dom's last words as well!

Shitty comment is shitty

[musadinessuno]

Aw, cheers!

I know Meg's attitude is somehow, well, creepy (beating someone with a stick - doesn't matter if she didn't really hurt him - it's still rather deplorable), but that's actually what happens, more than often, in a dance class. My own mum does it - she even puts her feet on her student's back, pushing them further down when they're stretching! That witch! :O

Thanks so much for reading this, though, and for your lovely (not shitty at all!) comment. ♥

[oh_cathy]

Alors, in primis scusa se scrivo in italiano, ma ho letto che sei italiana pure te e non trovandoci all'interno di una Community bensì sul tuo Journal personale penso che non danneggerei nessuno. O almeno credo. Spero. Boh. XD

[musadinessuno]

TUUUUU SEI CHEEDORI

[oh_cathy]

haha, cazzo. colpevole, mi hai sgamata. :)

ti ho scritto in privato così non inondiamo il post con le mie considerazioni mai richieste in primo luogo sara shut the fuck up, scusa se ti sono sembrata una rompiballe. ;)

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