rpf | oblivious

[muldy]

Title: Oblivious
Rating: PG
Summary: Went. Sarah. Scrabble. Josh.

Author's Notes: Due to a wonderful afternoon spent at home this is written (by order of xshorty24x) to follow Clumsy by xshorty24x and Ambiguous by aboutbefore (in that order). Inspired by Wentworth's insight that "...actually Sarah and her husband have whipped my ass on a number of occasions I'm sad to report

Comments

[xshorty24x]

She smiles and he feels his heart race just a little faster.

That sentence makes my heart race faster!

[aboutbefore]

This tag team thing should happen more often.

[rosie_spleen]

The tag team thing? You three have done really well here, and it was like reading something written so similarly, but with a slightly different emphasis.

Really great ending Fi. Quite demoralizing, as rpf between these two often is, but nicely written. The ending could have been quite bitter with Went being spiteful about competition, but you conclude it very well.

Did you read each other's fic prior to writing, or all chose a section of the scrabble game to write about?

Great idea, and a good way to give CPR to your muse.

[recycledfaery]

OMG this series was just fabulous!
This was so sad, but good!

[msgenevieve]

Aw, damn it. I'd forgotten how sad I get when I read angst RPF. Must you write it so well?