help_japan Found Poetry for notalwaysweak: This Will Be the Hard Part (BBT)

[muir_wolf]

Title: This Will Be the Hard Part
Rating: Rish/NC-17ish - look, there's sex.
Disclaimer: BBT isn't mine, etc.

This is found poetry for notalwaysweak, who very generously donated to help_japan("Found poetry is a type of poetry created by taking words, phrases, and sometimes whole passages from other sources and reframing them as poetry by making changes in spacing and/or

Comments

[notalwaysweak]

First of all, I must reiterate the OMFG as mentioned on twitter.

I love love love what you've done with this. I love how the words look and the lines you chose to still tell the story without needing the entire fic there for context. The pacing is perfect. It's just -- there is so much shiny here that I am running out of words and need to just wave my hands and flail a bit.

[muir_wolf]

I'm so glad you liked it! It was really fun to work with, especially the pacing - you've got these lovely long sentences that I really wanted to keep, so I played around with the style differently than I usually do, when I tend to chop them up mercilessly ;)

Again, thank you so much for donating and being patient with me! ♥

[notalwaysweak]

I'm glad you think they're lovely long sentences. I sometimes look at them and wonder if I'm just babbling.

It was definitely worth the wait!

[seularen]

The poetry and form is excellent. The fact that you make sex with a character who usually can't make physical contact incredibly believable and touching is just fantastic.

[jen4850]

"and flick
open the button."
Really conveys the excellent pacing of the original story. Excellent work with all your found poetry.