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msspell

A Constant Reminder

Jun 06, 2007 00:24

A Constant Reminder
Word count: 4,244
Characters: Jack Shephard, Juliet Burke
Rating: NC-17
Timeline: Between “Stranger in a Strange Land” and “Par Avion”. Slight AU.
Warnings: Graphic Sex, curse words galore.
Author’s Notes: With seven pages and a half on MS Word, this is officially the longest shit I’ve ever written for the Lost fandom, perhaps ( Read more... )

juliet burke, genre: drama, fandom: lost, jack shephard, jacket, genre: romance

Comments 14

kedda June 6 2007, 04:54:04 UTC

*turns on fan*

You are not helping my quest for celibacy...

msspell June 8 2007, 01:26:20 UTC

I would give up on my quest for celibacy if Jack Shephard, M.D. ever crossed my path. :D

Thanks!

vordogh June 6 2007, 17:19:32 UTC

I need a cold shower now..:) Really loved it,hot!

msspell June 8 2007, 01:16:39 UTC

My pleasure, honey. Enjoy your cold shower! ;D

allibabab June 8 2007, 03:48:24 UTC

Gorgeous and hot and just YESYESYES. I love the roughness of it, except that then it's still tender, because there's more between them than just release. You did a nice job with the voices too.

My favorite line was definitely the one you used for your link - I think that fit so well with what was going on, and it's just poetic in a sort of strange way.

Lovely job with this. ♥

msspell June 13 2007, 20:13:12 UTC

Thanks! Yes, I think that's about a moment in their relationship in which they still can't trust each other, but are already considering it. I'm glad you liked the voices, I usually try to imagine the actors reading the lines to see if it "sounds" right. :)

crickets June 10 2007, 03:52:21 UTC

I promised I would read this and here I am. *fans self* hehe. That was super duper hot my friend!

For some reason, this line is my favorite:

She pulls back again to whisper “Inside?” and he likes the double meaning of the word.

The last line as well.

Well done!

msspell June 13 2007, 20:08:56 UTC

Yay! Thanks! Glad you liked it. ;D

irinafan June 16 2007, 23:21:24 UTC

Loved this. =)

You should totally write a sequel to this where Jack pays her back once they're at the beach again. (No cameras, yay! )

msspell June 18 2007, 03:23:04 UTC

Thanks!

Well, it's up for consideration. I still have to write other 27 Juliet fics at the un_love_you table... ;D

irinafan June 18 2007, 10:45:44 UTC

see, you could totally take a little break from that. :D

Or work it in somehow. ^^