Comments | ms_deathbat: I'll Be Good While You Sleep

ms_deathbat

I'll Be Good While You Sleep

Feb 27, 2010 20:24

Title : I'll Be Good While You Sleep [standalone]
Author : ms_deathbat
Rating : NC-17
Warning : non-con and possible implications of underage sex
Pairing : Ryan/Brendon
Beta : The one and only, Cassie! [ rainxdrops12 ]
Summary :

He lay the sleeping boy down on the king sized bed, crawling in after him a moment later. The boy was out cold and the elder smiled ( Read more... )

ryan ross, creeper!ryan, ryden, brendon urie, fucked!up!fic, procrastination, slash, noncon

Comments 22

rainxdrops12 February 28 2010, 02:57:06 UTC

FC! You know I loved this :D
but with the D: face ;P haha

Lol, have you read any books by Bentley Little? Cause he almost writes like that, but with less detail xD All his books are scary/creepy xD

ms_deathbat February 28 2010, 03:00:58 UTC

lol! ;D

no i havent, haha. funny thing is i dont read scary stuff(besides slash cause that wins) and i dont watch scary stuff. like 99% of horror movies i havent seen Oo haha.

those mods might just hate me :O lol!

rainxdrops12 February 28 2010, 06:37:10 UTC

lol really? With Bentley Little, it's more like a supernatural force that is evil? Like "The University" The school was evil, the heart of the school was the library... so stuff like that xD they're really good books xD lol And now you must come on over and we have to watch a bunch of horror movies! and if it gets too gory..well we can fast foward I guess ;P haha ;D

and awwww, you can still post again! I usually got rejected a couple times before they accepted it, one time they DID accept it and the whole 3 page ending was deleted and a paragraph from the middle was at the end and I didn't realize it until I looked. so they fail!

ms_deathbat March 2 2010, 04:35:22 UTC

haha cool! ;D lol yeah obviously this has to happen... hehe exactly! ;D

yeah it all worked out :D haha thats so silly! i wonder how that happened :o lol! crazy stuff.

anonymous February 28 2010, 04:54:58 UTC

Hi! I just wanted to tell you that you may want to consider choosing something different for your summary? The warnings were awesome and spot on, but after reading the warnings the summary was enough to bring up some pretty bad memories for me and might upset other people. I figured you'd want to know, no offense!

ms_deathbat March 1 2010, 02:04:49 UTC

im so sorry! :'( i didnt realize that it would offend anyone. i will take down the summary asap (considering there isnt much else in the fic that isnt explicit, i will just take the summary down) again im very sorry *hugs* and i appreciate you letting me know. ;D

trustfewloveall February 28 2010, 05:43:08 UTC

Hi, Thank you for warning for non-con, but your summary is still fairly explicit and could trigger people. Could you possibly put that under a cut or change the wording? It would really be appreciated!

ms_deathbat March 1 2010, 02:01:15 UTC

yes absolutely, i didnt realize that or i would not have put it in the summary.
<3

I FOOKIN LUVIN DIS PART SO BEAUTIFUL anonymous February 28 2010, 05:47:00 UTC

He licks at the boys lips and kisses his mouth for a moment and it's getting him hard already.

Re: I FOOKIN LUVIN DIS PART SO BEAUTIFUL ms_deathbat March 1 2010, 01:59:22 UTC

haha, thank you so much! ;D
<3

ttlytrashed February 28 2010, 18:10:04 UTC

Your icon makes me want to cry.

ms_deathbat March 1 2010, 01:57:47 UTC

aww! im sorry D':
makes me want to cry as well, but i feel like its my tribute to him at the moment (cause i have no money for a tatoo)
im happy, though, that they are going to put out the album as a tribute to him... they are so amazing! ;D
and im happy that they involve us so much even through this tragedy.
family for life! *high!fives*