LJ Idol - Week 3: Brushback Pitch

[morettaallstar]

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Comments

[rayaso]

I love the way you worked the prompt into a poem about bullying! I really enjoyed reading this, especially the conclusion.

[morettaallstar]

Thanks, glad you enjoyed the happier ending! :)

[eternal_ot]

I liked the way you worked in the prompt. Like the fact that Jack has a change of heart and Tim learns to give back :) Good Job!

[morettaallstar]

Thanks! I'm a sucker for a happy ending, so I couldn't let it be all sad...

[magazhchi]

Wow! Well done indeed.

[morettaallstar]

Thank you for the lovely comment! :)

[swirlsofblue]

Brilliant. Love your descriptions here, so strong and visceral and real, can feel the pain and the sorrow. And I love the journey these two characters take and the way it ends. Awesome.

[morettaallstar]

Thanks for the kind words! Sorry for the delay, travelling internationally with (sigh) my schedule is pure madness at this time of year...

[sinnamongirl]

Thank you for your entry!

[morettaallstar]

Thank you for the comment! :)