"Separate Ways" (2/2)

[montana_rosalie]

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[vasiliki]

She wanted it all, and now they're both left with gaping Dean-shaped holes in their hearts.

Lovely! <3

Dean wraps his fingers around her wrist and stops her before she can touch it, turning his head to the side in shame she can't really understand. It puts distance between them, and she hates it.

She lays down next to him and when he meets her eyes, her dream comes back to her, vivid and heartbreaking, making her realize that, wherever he was, it wasn't pleasant. And he remembers every second of it.

This entire scene was very vivid and convincing! Dean turning his head from Lisa in shame. Female intuition realizing that the dream wasn't a dream, and he's hiding it from her.

[montana_rosalie]

:) I'm glad you liked that.

[turquoisetumult]

Very interesting and lovely conclusion. Great work!

[montana_rosalie]

Thanks! :)

[fannishliss]

wow, cool!

[montana_rosalie]

Thanks!

[ale_la_pazza1]

This is a good one <3

[montana_rosalie]

Thank you! :)

[darth_firefly]

Oh this was absolutely amazing. Wonderful work!

[montana_rosalie]

Thank you! I adore your icon. :)