FIC: Revenge!

[mithen]

Title: Revenge!
Pairing/Characters: Kal/Bruce
Notes: A sequel to Abducted!
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Bondage, some BDSM roleplay
Summary: Bruce Wayne gets his awful, awful revenge on the alien who kidnapped him for experimentation...
Word Count: 2100

Comments

[northern_star]

Hee! :D I love this little series, with the crazy sexy role-playing. Definitely not something I should have been reading at work, but then,...I really never learn about these things, and I keep doing it anyway. lol! :D

I really liked that you made it obvious in this the level of trust between them. And of course, this is incredibly sexy and all kinds of kinky fun. :D

And oh, yeah, the weird satisfied grin I'll be wearing all day... I blame you. Or I should dedicate it to you, actually. lol!

[mithen]

I cannot get enough of them role-playing, lol. Oh, silly superheroes and their games... Hee, I am happy to be blamed for that kind of grin, though! :D

[ctbn60]

I loved the first story and the sequel is just as delightful and hot!! Wonderful work!! Very nicely done.

[mithen]

LOL, I hadn't written any smut in so long (darn you, THOTE!), so I had a lot of fun with it!

[northernwalker]

"Shouldn't you be taking notes?" Bruce asked, stroking. "Measuring your engorgement level, your pulse rate?"

Kal muttered something very rude in Kryptonian. "Both are quite satisfactory," he said. "Quite."

Cannot brain right now. Laughing too hard.

But he was glad that of all the people in the world Clark could unwisely trust so deeply, he was the one Clark had chosen.

*melts*

Yay for new fic!

[mithen]

Cannot brain right now. Laughing too hard.

LOL, thank you! Poor Clark, Bruce was so mean to him here...but I think he didn't mind so much...

Yay for new fic indeed! I've been working on the series so long that it's like, "Whooo, one-shots, awesome!" There's a lot of stuff you can do with a one-shot that you just can't with a long series, something of a paradox...

[kirax2]

Ohh...this series is so hot. I just love when characters I love role-play together...it gives me this little extra thrill. I can't explain it. And now I have to go to work, too. *blinks*

The ending was beautiful.

[mithen]

I know what you mean! Characters playing with their roles (especially roles they actually kind of legitimately have) is so much fun to write...

The ending surprised me almost as much as Bruce, to be honest! I hadn't really thought about it, and then I needed a way out of the story and it went from there. :)

[bradygirl_12]

Wow! Still hot, still fantastic! :)

The trust thing at the end? Very Clark, trusting Bruce completely, and very Bruce, wishing he hadn't but glad he did. :)

The description of the colors in this is gorgeous, especially this:

Kal hung in his bonds, his satiated face lit by the aurora in tints of rose and aqua.

Also, I'm giggling at Clark being more at home in fuzzy flannel jammies than alien robes, because a guy who likes flannel shirts would so be more comfy that way! ;)

[mithen]

The trust thing at the end? Very Clark, trusting Bruce completely, and very Bruce, wishing he hadn't but glad he did. :)

It makes good sense for both of them, doesn't it?

Oh, and I loved writing all the colors in the Fortress...I love the crystal effects there so much.

Also, I'm giggling at Clark being more at home in fuzzy flannel jammies than alien robes, because a guy who likes flannel shirts would so be more comfy that way! ;)

I love the idea of Clark hanging out in the Fortress in fuzzy plaid pjs. :) It's a wonderful incongruity...

[bradygirl_12]

I also loved these lines:

Bruce touched the blue crystal on the wall and the room was plunged back into darkness broken only by the flickering aurora lights. "I prefer to work in the dark," he said.

Perfect Bat-thing to say! :)

Gold and green chased each other across Kal's face.

My Dickie sensors noticed the gold and green colors here. Nice choice! ;)

Fuzzy plaid PJs for the win! :)