FIC: Revenge!

[mithen]

Title: Revenge!
Pairing/Characters: Kal/Bruce
Notes: A sequel to Abducted!
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Bondage, some BDSM roleplay
Summary: Bruce Wayne gets his awful, awful revenge on the alien who kidnapped him for experimentation...
Word Count: 2100

Comments

[dizmo]

Okay. That was EERIE. A HALF AN HOUR AGO, I was rereading Abducted!, went through the comments, and was like... AAAH, THERE'S A SEQUEL WRITTEN! I HOPE SHE POSTS IT SOON. I tell tyriangalley, she thinks the same thing.

Two minutes ago... Her: Um, Erin, you might want to go look at mithen's journal...

Me: ... You have GOT to be kidding.

I don't know if there was some weird psychic confluence going on or something, but... ANYWAY.

lksdjfalk;sdjsldfk It's so epic. So so so epic.

Way to go, Bruce, totally tricking the alien researcher. Because that wasn't ridiculously transparent or anything, of course not.

And then just aaagh the attitudes, and Clark managing to stay detached-but-not-detached-because-you-know-he-isn't-really until he can't even pretend any more...

Ehehe, Wally, if you only knew.

And Bruce, of course he trusts you that much.

Just... ahhhhh this made me happy. *applaud*

[mithen]

OMG, that's so funny! :) Yay for psychic influence!

Way to go, Bruce, totally tricking the alien researcher. Because that wasn't ridiculously transparent or anything, of course not.

Oh man, I cracked up so much writing Clark being all "See, I shall show you how strong the bonds are! Oh my, I am trapped!" XD Silly boys...

Poor Wally, he is always the clueless one in my stories. He's so adorable when he's confused...

And Bruce, of course he trusts you that much.

Bruce is all, "Unwise! Very bad! And yet...so hot, somehow..." :D

I'm glad I responded to your psychic summons in a timely fashion!

[cat_13145]

Yeah!! Brilliant Sequel to brilliant story. Good thing wally wasn't there a few seconds earlier, lol

[mithen]

Wally's timing is flawless, isn't it? :D This was really fun to write! Glad you liked it!

[inkspottedtea]

(still lacking an icon. I WILL FIX THIS ONE DAY)

squuuuuuuueeeee.

the bit at the end. with the trust and the handcuffs? SO MUCH RIDICULOUS LOVE.

[mithen]

Mmm, thanks! Clark being all trusting is a kink of mine, maybe more than the cuffs themselves. :)

[gogglehead84]

I shouldn't have read that before I have to go work *has to fan self off* Hawt! XD Alarms had pretty good timing there too. Then to end it all with that bit of love at the end with the trusting! Loved it!

[mithen]

Hee, thank you! Posting smutty fics in the Western Hemisphere's morning seems to get me that kind of reaction sometimes. :)

[hitokaji]

Ohhhhhhh--! Soo so hot!! XD
*tries to cool herself down before she melts*
I really love the little game they were playing and the trust between them. This is great.

Thank you for sharing this with us and for brighten up my day. :)

[mithen]

*grin* Thank you! I love the smirk on your Batman icon, too! :D It seems to fit, somehow...