Comments | mithborien: FIC! 'Between words' [PG]

mithborien

FIC! 'Between words' [PG]

Jun 01, 2005 00:22

Title: Between words

Author: mithborien

Fandom: Harry Potter

Rating: PG

Summary: For as long as Remus can remember, Sirius Black has always had atrocious handwriting.

Word Count: 1806

Disclaimer: This story is based on characters, settings and situations created and owned by JK Rowling, various publishers including but not limited to Bloomsbury Books, ( Read more... )

fanfic: harry potter

Comments 16

kabeyk May 31 2005, 16:35:47 UTC

Oh, that's just lovely! I love boys messy handwriting, but oh. I just love it.x

However, I don't think it counts as a 'G' rating if you've used the word 'wankers', heh.

kxx

mithborien June 1 2005, 08:23:20 UTC

Thankyou!

And yeah, you're right about the rating, thanks :)

watchthe_sky May 31 2005, 16:40:48 UTC

Aww, I love this. It's sweet and sad and hopeful. And it is pre-R/S R/S! Love it!

Remus sighs then curls in a bit towards the other boy. He could say something equally profound in return but somehow that would ruin the moment. So he settles for what he hopes he believes is the truth.

How true to life this is. I like it a lot. Very very very much. Bravo!

horatia May 31 2005, 18:19:37 UTC

This was incredible sweet as well as well-writen. All the a good pre-slash should be!

mithborien June 1 2005, 08:25:32 UTC

Thankyou!

mithborien June 1 2005, 08:24:46 UTC

Thankyou!

And you quoted one of my favourite sentences as well :D

javajunkie13 May 31 2005, 18:05:19 UTC

Aw, yay! I love pre R/S :-D I love that Remus doesn't leave Sirius alone when he doesn't want to talk.

One of Remus’ hands finds its way into Sirius’ hair because he can feel the other boy shaking now.

*loves* I can picture that perfectly in my mind and it's adorable.

mithborien June 1 2005, 08:29:03 UTC

Hee, thankyou :)

minnow_53 May 31 2005, 19:30:13 UTC

I love handwriting as a metaphor. Or even not! Very sweet.

^_^

mithborien June 1 2005, 10:20:22 UTC

Thankyou!

scoradh May 31 2005, 20:19:44 UTC

I love how their handwriting was a vessel for describing their personalities in a nutshell; you really carried it off well. Now, what was missing? Oh, yes -- kissing? *hint, hint*

He can remember in second year when he had asked Sirius about it and Sirius had promptly replied that it was so messy because his hand couldn’t keep up with his gigantic, impressive brain.

I like your Sirius. He amuses me. 8D

mithborien June 1 2005, 10:21:24 UTC

I know, I know but they are kissing in my head ;) One of these days I will post something in which they kiss :D

Sirius amuses me as well.