Full Metal Alchemist, "Empty Nest 19: Nesting," A/D, E/R, F/W, NC-17

[mistr3ssquickly]

Ok, written mostly at Ohayocon, here we have chapter nineteen of Empty Nest. Al came up to me during the AMV competition (Russel was in one of the AMVs, by the way ... I nearly yanked Abi bald when he showed up on screen) and informed me that he was in control of this chapter, so if you don’t like it, blame him, not me

Comments

[alchemistjunkie]

*speaks in gibberish* Holy fuck! That was hot stuff. Then the angst and omg ahh!

So to translate. I really enjoyed this chapter even if you feel it wasn't good enough. I think the interaction between Fletcher and Winry is adorable. And the fact that Al called in the middle makes everything cuter.

AL AND DANNY ARE NO LONGER VIRGINS! You make me want to make an entry just to state that. But poor Al...it hurts my heart to see him sad. Poor poor Al.

I can't wait for the next part.

[alchemistjunkie]

omg is that a first comment! *Does a first comment dance* I knew scheduling classes early this morning would allow to accomplish something.

[mistr3ssquickly]

I'm glad you liked the chapter, sweetie. I'm just pissed that Al and Danny failed to wait more than 20 chapters to get laid, but it's not like I have any control over them anyway. *sigh*

Poor ol' Al. First he interrupts Fletcher, then no one has the decency to interrupt him. Just can't win, can he?

Next part's coming along. I'll try to post it up ASAP! Oh, and here is a cookie for posting first. I got to work and found your comment and just grinned for the rest of my hours.

Thank you for reading me!

[alchemistjunkie]

Well if my comment made you grin then we are even because your chapter made me grin.
And yea poor Al indeed, the kid never gets a break. And we learned long ago that you have no control over any of those boys. It doesn't come as a surprise that they made you write this chapter.
*goes to snack on cookie*

[elegy_19]

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooooooooooo! Where are you going Al! Get back to Danny right this second!

I think Al needs a little reminder about the immortal words of George Michael: "Sex is natural, sex is good, not everybody does it, but everybody should."

[mistr3ssquickly]

Hahaha, yes, someone needs to tell that to Al indeed. I wrote all of chapter 20, then the little bastard came back and pitched a fit about it, so i'm re-writing.

Jerk. He deserves the angst I give him.

I'm glad you were impassioned by the chapter hon. More will be up soon!

[chrstphrl]

THIS IS FUCKING AWESOME! Wow. Just wow. *glomps repeatedly* Fletcher and Winry are so cute together and I love Al interrupting them. Al and Danny losing their viginity was sweet and loving and scorching hot. Al's response is so natural and I'm sure he's very afraid. Amazing how Ed knows him so well that he knew something was wrong right away. And where the hell is Al going? *cracks whip* This one is amazing,no matter what you think, but I will be dying until I know Al is okay.

[mistr3ssquickly]

Wow, you liked it? *squints* I didn't, but hey, I'm glad you did!

Fletcher and Winry just melt me. Less angst than Roy/Riza, and I get to write het! As for Al and Danny ... it was Al's idea that they should go ahead and go all the way. I'm not happy about it, but that's just how it goes.

Twenty ... is going to be delayed. Patience is a virtue~~~.

thank you so much for reading me!

[lifeinahole27]

i'm so glad i didn't read the teaser in your hotel room when you offered...i would have stolen your computer/notebook so i could read the rest pronto.... i just stopped moving for a half hour so i could read this chapter.

holy. hell. that's all i have to say. i mean, you warned me... so i knew he was leaving... but i didn't know what happened before he left and oh my god i can't wait for 20 to be up!!!

i put my pics of me with you, dani, and the ed up on my journal, if you don't mind i'd love to post a link to it. but i only put the one of ed sitting in my lap... the other ones are still cuddling with my camera and matt and sean were a little confused when they saw them last night (haha).

chapter 20! ::bites.... but not too hard::

~Sar

[lifeinahole27]

oh yes... ps- winry and fletch's scene = hawt!!!!

[mistr3ssquickly]

I wrote all of 20, then Al came in. Guess what? It's getting re-written.

*sigh*

Indeed you should not have read the teaser, though what I was offering to let you read was part of chapter 18, so you'd have been safe. And yes, Al will be okay ... as in not-dead okay. I promise!

I'm glad you liked it, hon. Thank you for reading me!

[wicked_pistil]

Guh. I really shouldn't have read this without reading the rest yet, but it was right there, being all tempting and stuffs.

Lovely, dear, simply lovely. You even made the het singe so good. You write the Fletcher/Winry relationship just so appealingly (is that a word?!). I just love all your character interactions. *snog*

[mistr3ssquickly]

I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU READ THIS CHAPTER FIRST!!!!! *tears out hair*

Go read the rest. NOW. And yay, I'm glad you like Fletcher/Winry! They're my cute escape from angst.

Now. Go read the rest of the arc, you TRAITOR!

[wicked_pistil]

I'm in the process of finishing it up right now! And I WILL comment on all of your chapters, but I am like a little jittery addict and must read these straight through with no stopping in between for silly things like composing my thoughts. ^_~

[mistr3ssquickly]

Hahaha, when I first read that, I read it as "composting my thoughts," and that made me smile.

I'm glad you're reading the entire arc. Does it read differently, knowing that they're going to lose their virginity like this? I'm betting it does.

thank you so much for reading me. Hope you like the arc!