Fullmetal Alchemist, "Sins of the Father," Belsio/Nash, PG

[mistr3ssquickly]

OH SHI-*cough*

So I post up my latest story for the 20_inkspots challenge, and goldphish_bowl informs me that, if I don't hurry up and make with some freakin' happy fiction, she's gonna go all Scar on my ass.

Well. I was gonna try, honest. But come on, I'm writing Belsio/Nash, folks. It's just ... begging for angst

Comments

[acexkeikai]

that was a cute rendition of a what if talk ^___^ well done ^_^

[mistr3ssquickly]

Thanks!

These are slowly and brokenly coming together into a semblance of an arc, or a timeline, at least ... I think they'll probably fit together better once it's closer to being done. XD

Glad you liked, hon! Thanks for reading! ♥

~m

[goldphish_bowl]

D= i has lost my first comment rights.

I WEEP.

Not really. But regardless, though I didn't ry, I wibbled VERY VERY hard in reading this puppy, and had I been playing that DEPRESSING SONG, I probably would have ;_;

[mistr3ssquickly]

Aww, that's okay. I still love you. XD

Mmm, I'm glad this made you wibble, hon. Think of it as payback for the drawing making ME wibble. XD

*smooch*

~m

[insaneslasher]

That was so sad I almost cried. I liked how you handed Nash marriage and I loved the ending, with Russel and Nash hugging. The lyrics fitted with the story perfectly. I also loved the expressions in the picture, specially Nash's.

[mistr3ssquickly]

Mmm Phishy's art of this pairing always makes me wibble or laugh, seriously. I love how she draws them. ♥

I'm glad you liked the story, hon! I'm normally violently allergic to songfic, but the song just ... wouldn't leave me alone. ^_~

Thanks for reading! ♥

~m

[pockygirl]

i'll forgive you for writing songfic because it was good songfic and i rather like said song.

mmmm, backstory. <3

~pocky

[mistr3ssquickly]

Mmm, i still say it's not a songfic if the story can stand alone without the lyrics embedded ... XD

I'm glad you liked, hon! Thanks for reading! ♥

~m

[secretfreaky]

Yes, very sad. *wipes tears* At the same time it's beautiful for the hurt and pain coming out and being settled. The story needed to be told despite the anguish it causes.
Masterful work, as always. Beautiful art, as usual. *bows low*

[mistr3ssquickly]

*cuddles very much* I'm really glad you liked this, hon. It wasn't at all what I had in mind when I started writing it, which is interesting (to me) because the art isn't what Phishy intended when she drew it, either. But somehow they come together and work, eh? ^_~

Thank you so much for reading. I'm so very glad you liked how they came out! ♥

~m