Fullmetal Alchemist, "Humana," Belsio/Nash, R

[mistr3ssquickly]

Before anything else is said, I would like to state that I do not like this story. I don't care if it's well or poorly written, I don't care if it's creepy or cheesy, I do not like it.

WARNINGS: Deathfic. Dark, scary deathfic. Not sad so much as creepy.

The bunny said hop so I hopped, and this is what I got. Based off of a request by goldphish_bowl, and no,

Comments

[goldphish_bowl]

GAHHH! Tringham killer! were I not in shock, I'd be screaming. oh GOD--the Gate ate Russel and Fletcher OH GOD.

AND MEEF. ;__; now there's a tringham-papa with no kiddos to take care of! tragedy! and belsio--! *whines and squirms more* now he has a not-a-nash--but it's a KILLLLLLERRR.

uh. I think I'm going to reread it again.

and maybe again.

And it's not ALL my idea! XD you gave in!!

[goldphish_bowl]

The dust settled in the cellar, tinged with the pungent odor of lemon and the reek of ozone,

lemons...somehow i missed that the first time around. and deathfic or not, i giggled. belsio's lemon pledge strikes again, obviously.

[mistr3ssquickly]

*sneeeeerk* Actually, I had in mind that the crates of lemons he had stored in the cellar had tipped and smashed, smearing across the array. Kinda like the destruction-on-top-of-death thing ... wtf is wrong with me.

And Belsio say there's nothing wrong with lemon pledge. He'll be over to clean you, momentarily. XD

~m

[goldphish_bowl]

D= HE'LL HAVE TO CATCH ME FIRST, THE BASTARD!!

[pockygirl]

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GAAAAAH!

O_o

.. that is all.

GAAAAAH!

[mistr3ssquickly]

Yeah I know ... wtf.

I'll go and write something fluffy now! Honest! Really!

*hides*

I'm sorry?

*luff*

~m

[lifeinahole27]

O_O

... O___________O

my eyes can't get any wider.

and i think i just say "ditto" to the comments before me.

[mistr3ssquickly]

You know, I almost didn't post it. Decided to because I figured nobody'd ever believe I could write something OTHER than fluff if I didn't.

Imma go back to the fluffs now, eh?

*pets* I'm really sorry for this fic. I mean, really. *sigh*

~m

[lifeinahole27]

oh don't get me wrong. for as disturbing as it was, it was so well written. honestly, my favorite thing in the whole story was nash appearing behind the interrogator.

but fluffs are nicer still XD

[mistr3ssquickly]

My favorite thing about the story is that it's over and I can claim temporary insanity in writing it. Although I must confess, it feels good to post up something like this to prove to those flamers that I CAN write something not fluffy ...

Fluff! I need more of it. ;_;

♥

~m

[sailormac]

Wow. That's . . . impressively dark. You managed to get a true *horror* story out of FMA. And Belsio just goes along with the homunculus, even though he knows that's not really his lover and he'll never find the kids again . ..

(I do feel sorry for the Ed in this universe, though, since he'll never have a Russell. ~_^)

[mistr3ssquickly]

See now, in the back of my rotted little brain, I decided that Belsio was cooperating so as to protect Ed and Al, whom Nash is now hunting down. He'll be killed eventually for it. *nods*

My god I need fluff. Where's the fluff???

Thanks for reading, hon! ♥

~m

[secretfreaky]

This is definitely not you! Gah, what a horrible experiment you had to do! I'm glad you wrote this story for an outlet. Poor boys! Poor Nash and Belsio. Beautifully written, but so morbid. No, no, no not you. Please feel better soon so you may bless us with your warm fuzzies!

[mistr3ssquickly]

Hahaha, I almost didn't post this because it really isn't my style ... I mean come on, I won't even read stuff like this, and now I'm writing it.

I'm glad you liked it for what it's worth, hon, but yes, there will be fluffies following, that I can promise. I seem only to write one of these a year. XD

Thanks for reading, hon! I'll write something happier next! ♥

~m