Full Metal Alchemist, "Secondhand," Fletcher/Winry, Roy/Riza, R

Jun 18, 2006 00:03

Here's a plotbunny that attacked me while I was chatting, with I believe, with sailormac, although it's been so long ago now that I don't remember exactly pockygirl, who so kindly reminded me that this was her bunny. Interestingly, it was written exactly backwards, with the second section written entirely before the first, then the last bit added on because it ( Read more... )

fletcher, roy, fanfiction, al, winry, nc-17, fma

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dragonfemme June 18 2006, 22:12:23 UTC
Love it, as I do *all* of your stories. And I love how you continue this saga, I just adore the family.

Now I'm thinkin', everything turned out okay for Fletcher and Winry, and really, he didn't lie, but what's going on in *Roy's* head still? It's gotta be drivin' him crazy wondering why Al would ask such intimate questions about sex with women.

But as always, I love coming back to this world. So comfy, so sexy, so loving.

But awww, I made a comment at the end of the second saga, didn't you ever see it? Or did I accidentally put it through as anonymous?

♥Luv-Luv♥

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mistr3ssquickly June 18 2006, 23:39:10 UTC
I meant to respond to that comment ... wonder why I didn't? Wait a minute, I did! See? ^_^

And please, if you liked chapters individually, please please please leave comments on them. I go back through comments when I'm bored or feeling down, and having them on each section really strokes my ego lifts me up.

You're absolutely right about poor Roy. He'll probably wonder about Al's questions 'til the day he dies, but he's a good friend and won't tell anyone, which will mean that Fletcher lives longer. ^_~

I'm glad you like the universe I've created. I'm like you ... I return to it for comfort, save that I write it when I need comfort. ^_^

Thank you as always for reading me, hon! I really did miss you when you were absent!! ♥♥♥

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mistr3ssquickly June 18 2006, 23:42:56 UTC
Oh gosh, Roy *would* make a great cheerleader, don't you think? That would be hilarious! If only I could draw ...

It's odd how different it feels to write straight couples. You'd not think I'd write them all that differently from gay couples, but you're right that I do. I wonder if it's because I'm scared of getting too personal with het couples, where I don't feel that with gay men? That's why I won't write yuri ... too much "me" slipping into the fics.

I'm so glad you liked this, dear! Thank you for reading me! ♥

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equvilantexchgn June 18 2006, 23:41:48 UTC
DUDE.



It's true, what Winry doesn't know doesn't kill her....or Fletcher.

XD I loved this because of Al asking for sex advice from Mustang FOR Fletcher. That was precious. ♥

Totally cute. ♥ you!

~C

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mistr3ssquickly June 18 2006, 23:44:48 UTC
I dunno, hon. What Winry doesn't know--if she finds out--could very possibly kill Fletcher! I still say she's just lucky he didn't go to Alex. That's all I'm sayin'.

I'm glad you liked the fic, dear! Thanks for reading! ♥

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acexkeikai June 19 2006, 00:04:29 UTC
Awww that was cute... if you can say talking about sex technique is something cute =) well I loved it nevertheless it was a great read =D Yay ((HUGS))

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mistr3ssquickly June 19 2006, 00:12:16 UTC
I'm personally of the opinion that anything involving Al and Fletcher will certainly be cute, even if they ARE asking for het sex tips. ^_~

I'm glad you liked the fic, hon! Thanks for reading! ♥

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la_reine_lionne June 19 2006, 00:29:35 UTC
That was very nice. I'm surprised Roy didn't question Al more about why he was prying into Roy's sex life. I love it when you have Al go to Roy for advice. It's just so cute.

That song line gets me every time, that's just too funny. You're really getting the milage out of that. Although, maxxim_huzzah, just made me feel REALLY OLD by not recognizing it. God, there was such a controversy when that song came out. It seems so tame now!

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mistr3ssquickly June 19 2006, 01:31:52 UTC
Al and Roy, as father and son, is one of my all-time favorite dynamics in FMA, seriously. I wish the movie had emphasized it more, rather than making Roy all dumb and emo.

Indeed, I've gotten quite a bit of mileage out of that line ... this is its third appearance in my fic, I believe! And I've never heard the song, actually ... abimoe suggested it and I just couldn't resist.

I'm so glad you liked this story, hon! Thanks for reading! ^_^

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la_reine_lionne June 19 2006, 03:15:38 UTC
Aaahh.. all you young'uns! I was such a George Micheal Fan when I was in High School & Middle school. Personally, "I Want Your Sex" isn't one of my favorite songs of his. It did cause quite a stir back in the day, especially the video. It had lots of models running around in lingerie and George Micheal writing "Explore Monogamy" on them in lipstick. It's pretty cheesy. If I remember correctly MTV only ran it and a few Madonna videos only after midnight. One of my favorite sexy song you should try using is "I Touch Myself" by the Divynals. When I first heard it I didn't really pay attention to the words. It's got a catchy tune. Then I really listened and realize what she was singing about. It might work well in a fic.

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mistr3ssquickly June 19 2006, 04:12:42 UTC
Aw, c'mon, I'm not that young! Okay, so maybe I am. I do like George Michael, for the most part. I've seen the video you're talking about, and yeah, it's just ... meh. I've seen better.

But you're absolutely right, that would make a WICKED good fic ...

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