Comments | mister_troper: Whether

mister_troper

Whether

Feb 04, 2010 12:22

Title: Whether
Genre: Stageplay, romantic comedy
Word Count: 828 (w/ stage direction
Notes: needs a better title. At one point it gets a bit anvil-y, but I was aiming for brevity.

0210, comedy, stageplay, contest

Comments 12

aquarius_galuxy February 13 2010, 04:42:08 UTC

I liked how you wrote this! John's and Karen's interaction kept me reading on because I wanted to know how things were going to end. The SoNo issue was a nice touch - I could see how it relates to the real world (in fact, this entire piece is very much believable). It makes me think about their separate conversations with Becky after the meeting. Nice ending!

mister_troper February 13 2010, 18:27:38 UTC

Aw, I didn't even think about the conversation with Becky afterward. Awesome idea!

aquarius_galuxy February 14 2010, 00:24:01 UTC

You're welcome! =p

EDITOR toxic_apiaceae February 14 2010, 17:43:58 UTC

Hey, Mister! I know we’ve met a little bit via brigits_flame, but I don’t think I’ve had the pleasure of being your editor before. *crosses fingers* Here’s hoping it goes well ( ... )