Non-romantic EdoJellal/EdoErza for
laurelsblue who requested their thoughts on each other. Fits in with the manga continuity.
Disclaimer: Hiro Mashima owns the characters, I'm just elaborating a bit on his creation.
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Through the effort you put into describing the 'people' and the setting, you've really sharpened the background - the state of the world, the significance of this specific time period and the uncertainty that is the future. And having achieved this let you really bring out the strength and will of character that are Erza and Jellal, and the importance of the role that they are about to take part in in the new history of this reborn world.
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