This was great. I especially liked the part about Teyla considering the Genii's offer, and the part where she imagines what it would have been like if John had been able to stay with her. :)
Love! Very, very Teyla -- I can see her having so many sad moments during her time with the Athosians but never revealing her thoughts to anybody -- she's way too private for that. You've also nailed her interactions and friendships with the other characters, and I especially like her reflections on John. Great work!
This is just heart breakingly beautiful and raw and so very Teyla.
Gorgeous.
She decides she does not miss the screaming. Or the blood.
She wonders if John could have been happy here, and then she wonders if she would have been happy to let him.
She would watch football with John, invade Rodney’s lab space when he became too distracted to take her phone calls, and go to lunches with Elizabeth in fancy restaurants that she has heard about.
Very nice. I can imagine Teyla going through the different scenarios in her mind, and being quietly angry at the way things turned out. You write her really well :)
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This was great. I especially liked the part about Teyla considering the Genii's offer, and the part where she imagines what it would have been like if John had been able to stay with her. :)
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Gorgeous.
She decides she does not miss the screaming. Or the blood.
She wonders if John could have been happy here, and then she wonders if she would have been happy to let him.
She would watch football with John, invade Rodney’s lab space when he became too distracted to take her phone calls, and go to lunches with Elizabeth in fancy restaurants that she has heard about.
Are especially touching.
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great Teyla's voice btw!
and I do love her reflections of going to Earth and sharing all those things that you beautifully incorporated...nicely done!
thanks for sharing!
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