...and really bad crack...

[minviendha]

Beelz - Stephen Lynch: incredibly funny song.

Anyways. I got an idea for a story, so I started brainstorming. Going well so far. But you never know.

SUE UPDATE: Azhure...is now a goddess. Oh. My. God. No.

And the story! By me. Obviously.

The first time she saw him, she thought he was a dream. Standing there in her room, so ethereal, what was she

Comments

I liked it!

[zorpisuttle]

This is way better than anything I ever read/wrote in my creative writing class. I wasn't really surprised by the end (how she became the unicorn's mate) but that was more because of the foreshadowing (which may be just me having a dirty mind, so I won't go into details). I'm not quite sure why the unicorn turned grey, though- was it because she kissed Dante?

Sorry this is not up to my usual standards of insanely long comments- I have to catch the bus in a few minutes. >_<

Re: I liked it!

[minviendha]

Eeee, thanks!

To tell the truth, I'm not really sure myself. *is guilty* Dirty minds are okay. Really.

[minviendha]

Awww, thanks. You are too sweet. But I love it.

Awesome!

[youkokoenma]

I really like this. It's... bittersweet, maybe? Left me feeling both happy and a little sad, anyway ^_^

I've just got one little quibble--the police seem a little too... blasé?... about the whole thing. I don't think they're usually so careless when investigating a potential disappearance/death. At least, CSI leads me to believe they aren't. >.> A longer scene with one of the policemen seriously trying to figure out what happened might add an interesting element to the story.

Otherwise, this is excellent.