{fic} les jours fragiles

[mintstars]

les jours fragiles
akame, pg, one-shot. AU.
Kame thinks he’s human. Jin doesn’t know how to say otherwise. There isn’t much time left.

Comments

[atenishinai]

I like hybrid child.

I still need to read this.

[atenishinai]

Jin can find it in him to mind.
Can or can't?

Jin’s life has settled around Jin’s arrival and it’s calming to come home now from work and see Jin fiddling with something in the kitchen (he still doesn’t quite Kame not to burn something down, so he doesn’t let Kame touch the stove just yet.
Who's life around who's arrival? Doesn't quite trust Kame.

[atenishinai]

T_____T Jin just killed Kame. Or reset him.

...I don't understand the red slips though >_>

[mintstars]

er. must have missed those. I'll fix them now... yeah there was a bit of shuffling before this was eventually typed up.

turned off, actually. :D kame'll probably be sent back to the manufacturer for reconstruction in the future, I think. The fourth law of robotics is that "every robot must know that he is a robot" and the thing about this story is that Kame doesn't realize that, which explains the summary. the red slips are kind of YOU ARE HOSTING A BROKEN ROBOT HURRY UP AND DO SOMETHING ABOUT IT warnings.

[fyad7]

a bit sad at the end, but it's good that jin found happiness for a bit. wonder what the red slips said. i feel sry a bit sry for kame about the whole thing. thanks for sharing!!

[mintstars]

the red slips said something along the lines of "you're hosting a broken robot, please do something about this soon". or something. kame is a sad person, in many ways...

thank you for reading! :D

[elanielyn]

Short, beautiful, and good. Not quite a happy ending, not a heartbreaking one either. Long enough to get you engaged and pity the characters, but short enough not to make it overly sad.

I just love it and despite what I've just said, I whish it was longer ^^;

[mintstars]

I was thinking that it was maybe too short earlier, so that's a relief to hear ;;; there'll definitely be more Jin in the future, though, so ///

thank you so much! <3

[kirei_shinigami]

wow.

this is cool.

[mintstars]

Thank you! :D