fic: signal fire (kara/lee) chapter 07

[mintenergy]

Title: Signal Fire

Rating: PG/PG-13 For some strong language and adult themes.

Spoilers: All Seasons, All Episodes.

Status: Complete (Prologue+11 Chapters+ Epilogue)

Summary: Kara and Lee get one last chance to be together. Begins the moment after Daybreak II, on the hill where Kara didn’t say goodbye.

Special thanks to my sister,

Comments

[rayruz]

Great job bringing in the scene with Leoben. Fantastic and definitely necessary. Yay for exposition via creeperface. I just watched Flesh & Bone with my mother yesterday so I'm in a bit of a Leoben-y mood.

[mintenergy]

LOL. Creeperface. He totally is right? I can't stand his ass. Thank you for the compliment on the dream. I honestly didn't know if that was too space magicky but hey. It's fan fic and you write what's on your mind. Even if it is 'creeperface' Lmao.

[rayruz]

I actually love the Creep... it's infectious...my friend loves CKR from another show he was in and it sort of migrated creepily into BSG and I caught the adoration from her.

[mintenergy]

LOL. Well, I liked him during a short turn he had as an architect/good guy on Le Femme Nikita. But that was before BSG and then he started to creep me out. I liked him in Flesh and Bone, though. When he puts his hand against Kara's on the glass...

Actually, I guess it wasn't until the New Caprica arc and then that horrible disturbing paint scene w/ Kara in maelstrom that I started to feel like the whole line should have been airlocked.

[arielmoondance]

Kara hated when words seemed to just spill out of her like that. The least she could manage to spout off like that frakker Leoben in the future, the happier she would be.
bwahaha

“It’s what you wanted, Kara. To go back, to undo the thing you wish you hadn’t done. To have the chance to live your life on your own terms. You couldn’t do that in the shell that carried your soul. You needed to be…human...again.” As much as I dislike Leoben, head!Leoben is so useful.

YAY Lee for breaking her out and then whoa! I am on the edge of my seat here!

[justascrewup2]

I'm with Ariel. Totally on the edge of my seat! If only I didn't have other stuff that I really need to get done today :( Love the action and the uncertainty about what's going to happen in this cycle.

[innibis]

Is it my imagination, or did you just save Cally?

Nicely done. Tigh would repay someone for that act of loyalty.

And atta baby Lee! Get our girl out of jail!

[mintenergy]

I did. I'm sneaky like that.

And yes, I love Tigh, does it show? =)

I really enjoyed writing the Lee/Kara escape from the brig thing. I just love the thought of him stepping up to the plate like that, I guess.

[shah_of_blah]

Okay, so when I saw that you'd posted the final chapters I told myself that I should wait, pace myself...you know, savor them. But I just read three chapters straight through and I'm only stopping now to let you know how awesome they are. Which is very. There have been many highlights, but I think my favorite (at the moment) was the launch tube scene. There was just so much tension, which I thought was particularly impressive since I never actually thought Kara would die with so many chapters to go.

[mintenergy]

Aw, thank you! It means alot when people still stop to tell me they like it even though there's so many chapters to get through!