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Craig/Bridget - "Rehearsal" - R - RPF Warning

Jun 21, 2009 03:43

Title: Rehearsal
Author: Mia (richard_kahlan , legendofseeker , lotseekerfic , craigandbridget , and sword_of_lies

Author's Notes:

1) A big thanks to the mods over at sword_of_lies. I wrote this in response to bytheshoreline's prompt ("Craig/Bridget - rehearsing (or, aherm, "rehearsing") for ep. 1x13") for the comm's Seeker Kink 2 ficathon.

2) Un-BETA'd. Sorry if my grammar offends.

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!swordoflies, legend of the seeker, prose, fanfiction

Comments 18

bytheshoreline June 21 2009, 16:21:10 UTC

THIS IS PERFECT. I am grinning madly at how perfect this is.

He pulled something from his back pocket. It was a script. He waved it tauntingly at her.

“Oh, so you did read it,” she said coolly, masking the anticipation in her voice

I love how Craig tricks her with his slightly clueless and drunken ways, when all the while HE TOTALLY KNOWS WHAT HE'S DOING, the cheeky little bugger. Bridget's trying to be all cool and professional and Craigy just jumps on the chance to, er, actually jump her.

I ADORE how their rehearsal is a lot of Craig and Bridget and just a little of their characters' dialogue. It makes it entirely real, but also emphasises the parallels between their relationships.

“This is as far as we're supposed to go, you know.”

Loved this bit ♥ Hehe. Still with the teasing!

Soft porn, indeed.

RPF should always include obscure interview references. This one makes me laugh.

And for lack of a better ending, they promptly fell asleep atop eighty pages of neglected dialogue.Fantastic closing line! Excellent job :D *claps ( ... )

miasosublime June 22 2009, 03:38:54 UTC

Teehee. Thank you so much for the wonderful compliments :)

I have to hand it to YOU, though. Your prompt was simply too full of win to pass up. Can you keep a secret? This is the first fic I've ever completed. Evar. *kicks arsenal of embarrassing, half-started bunnies under bed* It takes a lot of inspiration for me to finish anything, but I guess it really clicked this time thanks to you!

I love how Craig tricks her with his slightly clueless and drunken ways, when all the while HE TOTALLY KNOWS WHAT HE'S DOING, the cheeky little bugger. Bridget's trying to be all cool and professional and Craigy just jumps on the chance to, er, actually jump her.

YESSCHHH. Apparently the dozen or so 4 minute interviews I spent watching because I am a geek little RP character studies paid off! Cheeky!Craig and SexyCool!Bridget! Wahoo!

I ADORE how their rehearsal is a lot of Craig and Bridget and just a little of their characters' dialogue. It makes it entirely real, but also emphasises the parallels between their relationships.Ahhh, I was ( ... )

bytheshoreline June 23 2009, 20:02:16 UTC

Teehee, it was the FIRST thing I thought of when I heard the words "Seeker Kink Ficathon." But oh my heavens, I am DULY impressed, not to mention flattered! And 'cause I might have skimmed your journal, too, I know you've only been in the fandom for A FEW DAYS, which is even more impressive. So happy my prompt inspired you to write (and complete) something for us :D

No, it was most certainly clear. Pssh, you don't need a beta!

Oh, boy. I have no idea, actually. I just had the vague concept of the thing, and then I had to cross my fingers that someone would snatch it up and I'd never have to consider doing it myself, haha. Certainly nothing as awesome as this ;)

miasosublime June 24 2009, 02:29:35 UTC

5 days, if you can believe it. Watched the pilot on Friday and never looked back. My experience has been like.. idk.. like a rollercoaster ride I never planned on taking, but I had an extra ticket to kill, so I went on it, and afterward I enjoyed it so much I bought a year-long pass to the theme park.

I'm starting to wonder if such a reaction can be considered healthy.

bytheshoreline June 24 2009, 04:00:41 UTC

It's Seeker fandom. It's not SUPPOSED to be healthy.

It's the drawer of inappropriate starches.

lorelaievans June 22 2009, 05:24:28 UTC

Seriously, this is made of win! God I loved it! They seemed so real. From what you get from interviews, that's how I imagine them speaking and acting, especially Craig.

Plus SO HOT! Guuuh I love it!

miasosublime June 22 2009, 23:53:22 UTC

From what you get from interviews, that's how I imagine them speaking and acting, especially Craig.

SUCCESS. :D

Thank you, and I'm glad you liked it<3

But I must admit- the thought of these interviews is slightly sobering now because they're basically all we have until *le gasp* season two. Oh, the anticipation! *sighs woefully*

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miasosublime June 22 2009, 23:55:24 UTC

Haha, the pleasure is all mine! I never realized how deliciously fun it could be writing sinful Cridget RPF's... Glad you liked it ;D

nebakanezer June 22 2009, 06:58:17 UTC

Oo very nice. Great job.

I did notice a tense shift at one point near the end just fyi but that didn't deter from the hottness. :)

miasosublime June 23 2009, 02:06:34 UTC

Hahaha, oh god.

It's such a bad habit of mine, I swear. Esp. when it comes to le secks. I guess subconsciously I find it easier to write those scenes in the present tense because they're so "in the moment" when I am imagining them! (That's what you get for not getting a BETA, Mia! *self-flagellates*)

I'm glad you enjoyed it, nevertheless :)