YAY! Oh, wow, I love it! The story is really progressing now. To think, I thought both of them were human in the beginning. I love where it's going and it made me smile. You're definately capturing Angela's personality, though she is a tad out of character with the last part where she ran out. While it's okay, she would get put on a distant-like look and pretend that nothing had happened and then just beat herself up internally about it.
By this time, Angela would start making a lot of mistakes, so keep that in mind if you continue working on this.
But yeah! It's the awesome-ness! This is one story I will most definately finish editing so you can post it on FictionPress. Now if htsaprc will just cooperate with me so I can finish THAT at least for you... -Suki/Rose
In my head she would walk away with her back straight and pretending that the tears on her face were from some dust. But that is still running away. I will make it cooler.
And you were supposed to think they were all human in the beginning. That was my master plot to deceive my readers mouahaha. Believe me, you still haven't seen it all.
I also decided to create a thing here. =) It would be a good place for me to post updates for my stories and I think it would be easier for both my fanfiction, fictionpress as well as my YouTube data. =) So i added you to my friends here. <3
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By this time, Angela would start making a lot of mistakes, so keep that in mind if you continue working on this.
But yeah! It's the awesome-ness! This is one story I will most definately finish editing so you can post it on FictionPress. Now if htsaprc will just cooperate with me so I can finish THAT at least for you... -Suki/Rose
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And you were supposed to think they were all human in the beginning. That was my master plot to deceive my readers mouahaha. Believe me, you still haven't seen it all.
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