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Jul 19, 2007 23:09

Title:Marauder Bylaw Number Three
Author:freakinwinky
Raiting: PG-13 for a bit of strong language
Genre:Humor, angst
Prompts: Pride and "Oh, come on. You heard them, Just behind the veil, didn't you? They were just lurking out of sight that's all. You heard them."
Summary: Sirius doesn't let his own death stand in the way of telling Remus exactly what he ( Read more... )

last chance full moon showdown, angst, freakinwinky, humour

Comments 17

oneandonlysusan July 20 2007, 06:09:38 UTC

Oh, that was a bit angsty at the end. But fitting. Dream Sirius was very funny, and I liked the combination of angst and humor. It flowed really well. Good job!

freakinwinky July 20 2007, 14:50:14 UTC

The flow was actually something I was really worried about in this piece, so I'm glad you think it worked well. Dream Sirius was quite fun to write! ;)

blackunicorn777 July 20 2007, 08:15:53 UTC

oh yes!this is really nice!I loved the Siriusy dream!and I loved Remus here!
really nice job!;D

freakinwinky July 20 2007, 14:49:06 UTC

Thanks :)

et13 July 20 2007, 08:19:29 UTC

* Waves "I <3 Sirius" flag * Your characterisation is spot on. =)

freakinwinky July 20 2007, 14:48:45 UTC

Thank you! Glad you liked it

lady_bracknell July 20 2007, 11:01:44 UTC

I'll leave you a proper review later, but can I put my modly hat on for a mo and ask you to edit this to fix your dropped bold tag and include a word count in your header?

Ta :).

freakinwinky July 20 2007, 14:48:14 UTC

My computer's decided to be strange and won't let me edit the post. I'm really sorry, I'll keep trying.

lady_bracknell July 20 2007, 17:44:03 UTC

It could well be LJ - it's been on the blink a lot lately....

lady_bracknell July 20 2007, 17:43:02 UTC

I really want to know what bylaws one and two are!

I liked this a lot. You got the Remus-Sirius banter spot on, and I love the idea of death not stopping Sirius Black from sticking his oar in. It'd be great to see a follow-up, and then maybe to see where the Remus/Tonks thing gets resolved.

freakinwinky July 20 2007, 18:49:16 UTC

I considered writing two follow up stories called Maurader Bylaw 1 and 2 in which Sirius continues to hound (forgive the horrible pun)Remus in his dreams until Remus is finally forced to give in. I was quite sad that I didn't have time to flesh those out before the deadline hit. Maybe I will anyway after Deathly Hallows, just to prove that I can. Anyway, thanks for reviewing and I'm very glad you liked it!
(And LJ's still giving me troubles when I try to edit. I'll fix it when I can, I promise).