Time stood still. One foot froze, suspended in midair as she descended the staircase. Everything around her seemed to move in slow motion as the words she had just heard echoed through her mind.
Bellatrix…family reunion…No Mad Eye let me tell her…
Cold, black, oily fear wrapped around her heart and constricted, hurting so intensely she
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Your comment about not expecting her parents to still be alive made me laugh, as I didn't either. Just kinda happened, but I like it when fic's write themselves like that.
Thank you again
Shwenny x x
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Shwenny x x
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love you x x
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Liked your descriptions too, especially:
Her pink and lime green bedspread, the organised chaos of her fathers study, the clean smell of washing powder and daisies that always lingered around her mother. The tree house in the back garden they built together, her mother playfully scolding her for not wanting the smaller, safer dolls house instead.
Really well done and it's a very good use of the prompts, as well. :)
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I really liked that you didn't kill them off, though, and I really loved Remus' last line. I've read a number of fics where Remus is the one who finished Bellatrix - and I always like them :).
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