Title: Subterfuge
Author:
shimotsukiFormat: One-shot
Rating: PG
Warnings: Mild violence
Prompts: Healing Paste; Fred/George, Mad-Eye; think; action/adventure
Word Count: 3036 words
Summary [revised]: Tonks answers a summons from Remus. It's the first she's seen him since he left to join Greyback's pack, and George Weasley, along to help out, picks up on
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Excellent use of prompts as well. You've worked them in so well together! The circumstances must be very dire for Remus to make her take his wand. Giving up a possession like that seems almost... suicidal. And yet logical too, because his reasons do make sense. The ending sort of leaves you hanging, which is exactly what it is supposed to do!
Nicely done!
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All in all, simply a wonderful fic. :D
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I definitely agree about the usefulness of writing from a third POV, especially when you want to either (a) admire or (b) pity both Remus and Tonks at the same time -- doing that from one of their perspectives can feel odd!
Thanks very much for your comments.
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And thanks for leaving such a detailed, thoughtful review. I'm especially glad that you picked up on what I was trying to show in Tonks. I don't think sad has to mean incompetent, at all.
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