FIC: Before I Leave You for yue_ix

[a_shadow_there]

Title: Before I Leave You
Author: ???
Pairing(s): Morgause/Morgana, a little bit of implied Gwen/Morgana.
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: incest.
Summary: Morgana rewrites her life with Morgause as a fairytale, the night before she leaves for Camelot.
A/N: contains a little implied power play. Thanks to Amanda for all her usual, wonderful betaing help.

Comments

[lovepb]

Ooooo, lovely! :)

[olivia_j]

Wow, that's gorgeous. I love all the subtleties and layers in their interactions here. Beautiful!

[archaeologist_d]

OH, lovely. Loved that there was such a hint of darkness. Well done.

[yue_ix]

OMG, I can't believe I missed this all this time. I'm so sorry!

It's awesome, and very enjoyable! I adored how visual it all was - the fabrics and reflections and colours in this. The girls are reweaving the classic fairytale ideas, addressing and looking at each other sometimes directly, sometimes through the mirror of the glass, sometimes looking outside and sometimes looking through the other. I liked the darker possessiveness and sureness of their promises. There's layers all over, and showing sides that the canon didn't; it felt like a kaleidoscopic discussion.

On a pure 100% hot factors, there was also: BOOKS, lap-sitting, concealed weapons under their dresses, and holding of wrists. So much love!

THANK YOU, THANK YOU, AUTHOR! ♥

[emei]

Ooh, this is amazing. I love the layers, how you thread classic fairytales ideas throughout and subvert them, have Morgana telling her own story, and with great characterization. And Gwen, too. The combination of affection and darkness here is great, and then it's hot to boot.